The primary goal of education is to get a job.
First of all,what is education? Education can be anything from learning a language to learning how to cook. Many times we go to classes to learn different sports that doesn't mean that we want to pursue our career in that particular sports. We just do that for our hobbies. Even if the author is talking about academic education then also a person completing his education will not neccesarily do a job he might do business or might pursue his passion as a career. So according to me primary aim of education is to develop skills in person in that particular field. After development of skills that person can do anything he wants and job not the only option left for him.
Pursuing education in a particular field and doing job or career in that field are 2 different things. For example, famous cricketer and also ex captain of Indian Cricket Team Anil Kumble is a IIT Graduate. Billioniare Elon Musk, the founder of Tesla and SpaceX has done his graduation in Arts. Just imagine if Elon Musk would have pursued his career in Arts field and Anil Kumble would have decided to join job then we would not have got such talents in their fields.
Also if someone want to start a business after pursuing education instead of job. For example, a Mechanical Engineer who has completed his Bachelors wants to start a manufacturing workshop so in such case his primary goal was so start a workshop or a Civil Engineer wants to start his own Construction Company after completing his education.
But in today's world of competition the primary goal of education is to get a job. As we see many students are not pursuing career in the fields in which they are interested but in the field where jobs are available. For example,many Mechanical Engineers who are not ineterested in things like coding etc are learning coding for better job opportunities. But due to lack interest in that particular field it leads to depression anxiety etc.
Atlast,I just want to say that primary goal of education differs person to person. We can't say what is going on in someone's mind. So going to the conclusion that primary goal of education is to get a job will not be appropriate
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, for example, talking about, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 381.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68766404199 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6616580363 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472440944882 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.7707068363 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.05 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338045403969 0.243740707755 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12825502293 0.0831039109588 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176172845668 0.0758088955206 232% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22080050659 0.150359130593 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129264318627 0.0667264976115 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.1392134831 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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