The Primary purpose of the education is to get a job.
The Primary purpose of the education according to author is to get a job. however, I partially disagree with this notion. education should be the primary goal of every person to lead a respectable life and be the responsible citizens of the country.
The primary purpose of education should be to understand the way of life and live it in a meaningful way. This I say because i feel if the person has not achieved the primary basic education it is very difficult for his to survive in this dynamic world which is ever-changing. For example if the person does not have any basic education he/she will not be able to understand the basic things such as manners, communication skills, etc. Thus then it becomes very difficult for him/her to compete in this fast-moving world. Thus the primary purpose of the education should be to understand the way of life and to live it in a meaningful way.
Sometimes it so happens that to get a get better life people tend to get a formal education to get out of destitution and make their life more comfortable. In this scenario the primary purpose of education becomes to get a decent job. For example if a person is living in destitution or poor condition and decides to get an education and making sure he/ she will get a decent job to support his family needs. Thus then the education is obtained to get a job which ultimately gets them their needs fulfilled.
Therefore, irrespective of the purpose of the education we can clearly state that it always helps people to live a better and respectable life. The primary goal of education is not just to get a job but to get a life which is worth living.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
...on according to author is to get a job. however, I partially disagree with this notion....
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Suggestion: Education
... I partially disagree with this notion. education should be the primary goal of every per...
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... responsible citizens of the country. The primary purpose of education should ...
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... understand the way of life and live it in a meaningful way. This I say because i feel if the perso...
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...in a meaningful way. This I say because i feel if the person has not achieved the...
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...r to compete in this fast-moving world. Thus the primary purpose of the education sh...
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...derstand the way of life and to live it in a meaningful way. Sometimes it so happens that to ...
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...e and to live it in a meaningful way. Sometimes it so happens that to get a ge...
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Suggestion: Thus,
...decent job to support his family needs. Thus then the education is obtained to get a...
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Suggestion: fulfilling; to be fulfilled
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...tely gets them their needs fulfilled. Therefore, irrespective of the purpose ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 296.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60472972973 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.726039451 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 215.323595506 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422297297297 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9868398264 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3571428571 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.55734181792 0.243740707755 229% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.251804396583 0.0831039109588 303% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.215752189396 0.0758088955206 285% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.40041709182 0.150359130593 266% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122936019371 0.0667264976115 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 100.480337079 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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