Today it is clear that our increasing use of technology has caused more harm than good to mankind.
The author supposes that the technology has caused more harm than the good to the humanity.This is partially correct considering the dangerous ascepts of the technology such as using the technology for evil purposes.However the technology has always been the shoulder to the development of human society be it artificial intelligence, nuclear technology, etc.
Our dependence on technology is the major cause of our complex and efficient productivity.with the help of technology we can solve complex and advanced problems which were earlier implausible to do.For example complex mathematical expressions earlier which took days of solving can now be done within no time using the softwares.This makes us more available to the much more complex problems of human society.Thus the technology has played a vital role in advancement of human society.
Similarly technology has made our lives more easy to live. The advancement of technology in easing the mundane life has made us tension free to some extent, such as if a person working late night due to intense work load is unable to wake up early in morning to have sufficient time tot get ready. the coffee maker will help him cut his time earlier invested in making and thereby saving him some time to reach office on time. Thus the technology has made this world a better place to live.
The prompt says that it has caused more harm than good this he says because of the few possibilities that technology is used in several bad places however the technology has done much more good to mankind than harm.
Comments
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... using the technology for evil purposes.However the technology has always been the shou...
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...ntelligence, nuclear technology, etc. Our dependence on technology is the majo...
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...role in advancement of human society. Similarly technology has made our lives more easy...
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...ent time tot get ready. the coffee maker will help him cut his time earlier inves...
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... him some time to reach office on time. Thus the technology has made this world a be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, similarly, so, thus, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 260.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01923076923 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92522947059 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 704.065955056 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 23.0359550562 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.943657006 60.3974514979 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 186.428571429 118.986275619 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.1428571429 23.4991977007 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 5.21951772744 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350495829535 0.243740707755 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160337271163 0.0831039109588 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145967777029 0.0758088955206 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240172935503 0.150359130593 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13719000023 0.0667264976115 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 14.1392134831 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 48.8420337079 69% => OK
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 100.480337079 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 33.5 11.8971910112 282% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 11.2143820225 150% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.7820224719 178% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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