Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
it goes without saying in this ever-going and swift era in which we live, new phenomena have raised, and the face of the human being living is varied compared to what it was in the past. one of these phenomena is scandals which by the advent of the new technology and social media are ubiquitous. although some people argue that they are useful for their reforming characteristics, others stand on the other side, refute the notion and claim that the detrimental consequences of the scandals leaking are considerable. I believe that there are some benefits to society in scandals, but some demerits also exist. The facts and reasons to substantiate my notion are elaborated upon hereunder.
public shame through some cultural and behavioural issues can lead to a catastrophe which is not compensable. Depend on the people and the social structure, there are always many topics that most of the members are reluctant to argue about. In many cases, this negligence results in corruption and also public calamity. hence, there should be something to stimulate people's attention to spend more time on the issues and focus their attention to find the best solution to the issue. For example, thirty years ago when most people did not have the capacity to even think about homosexuality and a severe hindrance was on the road of being a homosexual or even have those tendencies, a scandal broadcast over newspapers. The news was that a priest in an old church at Wisconsin had sexual intercourse with his colleague. As consequent, many people started to talk about the issue with their own perspectives. some condemned the action; others began to investigate the causality of event and mass media covered the scandal. this social movement gradually discloses that there are many other people who live in the country with the same attitude and the same problem. Finally, after a long twenty years of declaration and arguments, homosexuals got their own rights and had some social acceptance. In this regard, scandals was a trigger to a national conversation and attention about an issue which was remarkably ignored.
On the other side, by the advance of social media, access to the population is increased. Nowadays, most people members of public networks such as Youtube and Instagram. many renowned people who do not have any outstanding talent except having many followers are emerged. they are referred to as "Celebrity" or "influencer". they need to absorb more followers; however, the way of attracting people is not the case. Therefore, many unusual techniques and methods are employed to deceive people and motivate them to be a member of the page or channel. it may have a detrimental effect on society, especially youngsters. To make it clear an example can drive the notion home. Kim Kardashian, as one of the most prominent influencers, has more than 10 million followers. Last year, she lost 2 million of her followers because of the best performance of her opponents and losing her attractiveness for the people. hence, a scandal broadcasted showed she and her boyfriend having sexual intercourse. although later it revealed that the film spread deliberately and with their consent, the public attention was focused on the film and her followers raised to 11 million people, most of whom were teenagers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, such as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2801.0 2235.4752809 125% => OK
No of words: 547.0 442.535393258 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12065813528 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83611736076 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98067754656 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 285.0 215.323595506 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521023765996 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 885.6 704.065955056 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.9801837308 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.035714286 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5357142857 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.39285714286 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123581381371 0.243740707755 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0295259579122 0.0831039109588 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315761421581 0.0758088955206 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887295412515 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271420040175 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 146.0 100.480337079 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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