Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
In the given issue it is mensioned that scandals are useful because it can have more impact than any other speaker or reformer.
So, here i would like give my openion from both the side's at a certain point will agree with and at the same time time would like to disagree too, here author put his thought's by supporting on scaldals, I would like given my opinion my below.
Firstly, I would like support the argument to get agree with the given scenario, surely the scandals help us in a better way than any other informer or a speaker. Now the quetion is how, so lets look at some examples so that we can clear the picture on this. if we see the example of asaram baapu the guru who is used to teach us and show the way of humanity and nonviolence. he found the biggest suspect of same area because he used to hide all the things and were operating hiddenly. if the girl who cought on his scam couldn't take the stand for her justis noone could know that what is happening under the name of trust and the aashram wich were registered under the name of asaram bapu. now this wosen't come to the picture if one one would take the stand for this. and no i personaly belive that no informer and speaker could able to reveal this matter it was only possible due to the scandal. and now the the suspect is paying for the karma he had done. so this is the better way if want to stopped or reveal something which is not good for the society the our culture. So this is how, I would like to agree with given issue.
Secondly if we see this issue from the other perspective like if we disgree with given point. there could be some area's there we can phase some issue that we will see below.
There are many examples in that we can see we personaly or the national had a lot of benifits due to the informer and the speakers. like we as a nation have to set the secret mession on something we always go with better informer who stands with us and can surly helps in many ways by providing a lot of sensitive information or the cypher codes which which is develped by the opponent.
in this can our scandals way failed because they can not understand the situation or could not act like human being if we go with the ides with some hidden cameras or by not present there physically. so this kind of issue we can have with the scandals rather than the informer or any speaker.
I would like conculde here by giving my thoughts in both the ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 466.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.22961373391 5.05705443957 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13816731629 2.79657885939 76% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43347639485 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1330978334 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.736842105 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5263157895 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.89473684211 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143506797688 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531712337154 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627350049344 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737679912098 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752852331234 0.0667264976115 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 48.8420337079 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.55 12.1639044944 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.8971910112 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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