Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
In a democratic world, every government of the country is working towards the betterment of their country by introducing the newer reforms everyday. Sometime, this reforms are well enough to bost the economy and sometimes they fail to do that. Anyways, government is always working to make their country a better place, so I believe playing with the rules set the government is not a ideal thing to do.
Firstly, if we take a look at the history of scandals, no one has played short. What I mean to say is that scandals could cause huge disturbance in economy and there would be a effect, either small or big, on the financial market or on GDP of the country. If we take a example from India, it has seen its biggest scam in a year 1992 as Harshat Metha Scam. This cause the disturbance of around Rs 5,000 crores in the Indian financial market, which fell sharply in the subsiquent years as well.
I do agree with the statement for a short period of time as well, this Harshat Metha Scam helped the Indian government to find the loopholes in the system, which helped them to stop such scandals taking place. But, talking particularly about the Harshat Metha Scam, the Indian government did have to pay the price, as Prime Minister at that time had to resign just becasue this particular scam has taken place during his leadership. So, scandals cost fortune to goverment as well, which may futher decline the financial market or cause the state of depresion in the market.
Considering the facts and checks from the above, I do belive sometime scandals would be helpful to find the loopholes, but they come with huge cost as well, which would not be benefical of the country's financial stituation.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ountry by introducing the newer reforms everyday. Sometime, this reforms are well enough...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 383, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ith the rules set the government is not a ideal thing to do. Firstly, if we t...
^
Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...sturbance in economy and there would be a effect, either small or big, on the fin...
^
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...et or on GDP of the country. If we take a example from India, it has seen its big...
^
Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...do agree with the statement for a short period of time as well, this Harshat Metha Scam helped...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l of the countrys financial stituation.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, so, well, i mean
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 2235.4752809 63% => OK
No of words: 300.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68666666667 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49702934615 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 704.065955056 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3001976281 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.818181818 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2727272727 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112894120617 0.243740707755 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448402614924 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351836108693 0.0758088955206 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743304495014 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284724765769 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 48.8420337079 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 100.480337079 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ountry by introducing the newer reforms everyday. Sometime, this reforms are well enough...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 383, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ith the rules set the government is not a ideal thing to do. Firstly, if we t...
^
Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...sturbance in economy and there would be a effect, either small or big, on the fin...
^
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...et or on GDP of the country. If we take a example from India, it has seen its big...
^
Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...do agree with the statement for a short period of time as well, this Harshat Metha Scam helped...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l of the countrys financial stituation.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, so, well, i mean
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 2235.4752809 63% => OK
No of words: 300.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68666666667 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49702934615 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 704.065955056 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3001976281 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.818181818 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2727272727 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112894120617 0.243740707755 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448402614924 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351836108693 0.0758088955206 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743304495014 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284724765769 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 48.8420337079 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 100.480337079 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.