Schools hold immense responsibility for the development of future generation. Studies has shown that, a person’s childhood plays an important role throughtout his adult life. They truly believe in their childhood teachings and also it’s easy to believe at that age of innocence. This essay is in support of the issue, thus students should be prepared for adult life while in school using non-academic courses.
Discipline has always been a good part of schools since starting whether reaching schools on time or not missing any class are all parts of good discipline which we all learned in our schools days. In my school days, there were few cases of students coming late to classes or morning prayers. Instead of teaching them the benefits of discipline, they used to get punished in front of whole class, so these students never understood the real reason behind displine and how it can improve their adult life all together.
We can see differences in minds all around us in this world, sometimes what we read, we believe and keep on trusting the fact that whatever we were taught in our schools are always right. We trust the teachers and our parents, but in real adult world, this doesn’t stand true always. Our schools should prepare kids in more realistic way, they should be ready to accept differences in people’s views. They should taught how to respect and admire a person regardless of differences and teachings they have brought up with. For example; schools should teach about understanding of religion in brief so that kids respect all religions. They should be taught history of all religions regardless of the need to practice one. While most of the students finds interest in their academic subjects, few of them are always feel more enthusiastist about sports or simply debating. There is no doubt that over the last century schools are delivering better in the educational need of a human and getting even better by changing the techniques to educate the new generation.
Health is one of the biggest concerns for kids in United States. Studies has shown kids are getting obese due to their unhealthy choices of food. Generally we assume that parents are responsible for their kids food habits, in this area schools should do more about educating kids, how to choose healthy foods and why it’s important for their healthy adult life. Sports has always been part of school education, students learn a lot about sports and games in school. But there are student who do not participate in any game. Though we can not compel them to play but we can encourage them learn self-defense and other physical activities to be active throughout. I personally believe practicing Yoga will help students to be active and concentrated. Though there are many schools in India already doing it. Often we have heard about the cases where students feel themselves superior to others in many aspects, and they bully others kids around them, this is one of the biggest concerns of parents and schools too. In my opinion schools should ensure good supervision on things and also teach all of their students to learn good behaviours.
I conclude this essay agreeing with issue that schools should do more for students so that they can be prepared mentally and physically for their adult life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 824, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'felt'.
Suggestion: felt
...ademic subjects, few of them are always feel more enthusiastist about sports or simp...
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Line 7, column 486, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'students'?
Suggestion: students
...orts and games in school. But there are student who do not participate in any game. Tho...
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Line 7, column 755, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...students to be active and concentrated. Though there are many schools in India already...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, while, for example, in brief, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 33.0505617978 185% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2778.0 2235.4752809 124% => OK
No of words: 556.0 442.535393258 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9964028777 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85588840946 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59875593811 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 215.323595506 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485611510791 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 818.1 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6790289474 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.846153846 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309970398808 0.243740707755 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952114866633 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090210502956 0.0758088955206 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208644858891 0.150359130593 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735419739779 0.0667264976115 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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