Technology has given many gifts to human kind. Technology has helped to improve lives of human drastically from last two centuries. I disagree that technology is complicating lives, yet the older generation has the same perception that technology is getting difficult to persuade and making lives complicated. Though my thoughts are completely different on this.
Technology has made world a smaller place now, we can easily connect with our loved ones from miles away. Machines are helping human in every aspect of their lives. People are invoving latest technologies like Artifical Intelligence models to track, understand and improve their businesses. Recent statistics provided by scientists has proved that the life expectancy has been improved immensely from past centuries. Technolgy has helped doctors to improve their work and save many lives from many dieases and life threating events.
Saftey has been a big concern for human kind, and technolgy has helped in this greatly. Telephone, mobile, pager, GPS etc are great examples of technolgy development. Though technolgy has helped greatly in many areas, there are few areas where it is threating human life at large scale such as nuclear experiments and every country wants to become nuclear power. This is the biggest threat for human life and also for the whole planet. Still human species learn from their own past behaviour and trying to make peace in the world with diplomatic talks rather that war.
In the conclusion, I disagree with the fact the technology is making life complicated. I believe that it depends on individual how they use or misuse the technolgy on hand. Although humans are always emerging and improving with time and technology. Overall, it is always on one's hand to understand and use any tool wisely.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 311, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... persuade and making lives complicated. Though my thoughts are completely different on...
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Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'invoving the latest'.
Suggestion: invoving the latest
...every aspect of their lives. People are invoving latest technologies like Artifical Intelligenc...
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Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...man life and also for the whole planet. Still human species learn from their own past...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 289.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24221453287 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65417998636 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584775086505 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3559257151 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1666666667 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0555555556 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55555555556 5.21951772744 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0912113841413 0.243740707755 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0288651410066 0.0831039109588 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400388044554 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0595125354069 0.150359130593 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306016579922 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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