Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children over the age of 15 should be allowed to vote. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Voting rights has always been a controversial topic in different eras. To decide that, who should be allowed to vote, and whoelse not, is really can be a long debate. History tells, that, In USA, even women was not a part of voting right for a long time along with african and minor communities. After a long fight and many protests, they were allowed to be equal participant to make society and choose their own leaders. This idea that children over the age of 15 should be allowed or not is quite debatable. In my opinion, we should allow young children to vote, and my reasons to say that are mentioned in next paragraphs.
In ancient era, human was considered as an adult, once they are capable of reproduction, and that generally happens, at the age of 13 or 14. These young adult are intelligent enough to make choices for themselves, on the contrast, these choices might be wrong according to older adults of the family. And that's how we become we learn and more become more experienced over time by making mistakes. So I believe, when young adults are smart to protect themselves and find enough resources for survival, then yes, they are intelligent enough to choose their own leaders. Thus, they should be allowed to vote.
Studies has shown that, children above the age of 15, starts demanding their own right privacy and they expect less intervention from their parents. for ex: their own room. Sometimes these traits tells us, that they are ready for their new "rite of passage". Although, generally people holds different opinion on this, but my reasoning is, that when we can allow 16 year old to drive on highway and give them responsibility to take care of the house when parents are not at home, then why not voting rights. This will give them an extra sense of responsibility towards society. They will feel equally responsible when their choosen leaders act on something.
If teenagers are exposed to major responsibilities in their early life that can change their attitude towards issues and they can take a real stand on understanding politics and voting the right candidate. for example: many girls get pregnant at the age of 15 or later, not just in USA, but all around the world. In these occassion, sometimes parents behaviour might look childish, they can abandon their kids for such mistakes. But teenagers take the responsibility and behave like adult.
I beleive that this topic has immense potential for a long debate or might become a law of our socitey after sometime, but for now, I hold my thoughts on in the support of this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, then, thus, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2140.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79820627803 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62355983711 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529147982063 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9323597693 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2727272727 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95454545455 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162256296343 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589348706244 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787790410995 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909826876518 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087707567103 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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