Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education. Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society.

Morality is deep rooted in our everyday behaviour. Though I believe human tends to changes throught-out their life. Truth is, we all learn and develop new moral ethics and leave behind many other. I mostly agree that moral values which we learn with our own logical reasoning are the ones which stay with longer rather than the ones which we learned at school.

When family Adults try to educate their children on good and bad behaviour, they do not consider them to learn on their own. Adults believe that when it comes to children behaviour, they should be taught rights and wrongs of society. For example; bullying, if one child starts bullying someone in his or her class in front of all children, many kids will get frigthen and might not say anything, instead few kids might learn same bullying behaviour. Kids learn most from their environment, so then these events occur, the question of morality becomes obscure. Though, teacher are educating all kids similar things that how to behave with others, however few of them go rogue with losing all morality.
Instead of that if children can see and learn that why bullying or hurting someone can be bad for themselves, then may be there is some hope for building deeper morality.

Humans has developed many religions over the period of world's history. Few religions has branches deep rooted in time. The necessity of religion shows how morality is needed in our life. Though people learn and behave as per their religion throught-out their childhood, but few changes their belief system when they becomes adult. They stop doing certain things as per guidelines of their religion or might even change their religion as per their logical reasoning of adult mind. Which is sometimes helps them to connect with true meaning of life.

Sometimes in life, we feel need of some moral lessons, and we look for someone who can teach us about the good and bad of life. Also sometimes these moments can change our thinking for good, still in that very moment we judge other person opinion with our own logical reasoning and find truth in that. In conclusion, I believe that the better we understand the world on our own path, the better it is for everyone around us.

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Average: 5.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... deep rooted in our everyday behaviour. Though I believe human tends to changes throug...
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'change'.
Suggestion: change
...aviour. Though I believe human tends to changes throught-out their life. Truth is, we a...
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Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun other seems to be countable; consider using: 'many others'.
Suggestion: many others
...velop new moral ethics and leave behind many other. I mostly agree that moral values which...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'become'
Suggestion: become
...w changes their belief system when they becomes adult. They stop doing certain things a...
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... their logical reasoning of adult mind. Which is sometimes helps them to connect with...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...each us about the good and bad of life. Also sometimes these moments can change our ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, still, then, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 382.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82722513089 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27013315998 2.79657885939 81% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526178010471 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3725131117 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0526315789 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1052631579 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.10526315789 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149012176413 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491972856603 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404371549468 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835614857135 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321760434982 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 48.8420337079 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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