Science and religion are two different prospects in life.Science is the study of physical and structural definitions of all kind of objects in existence whereas religion is based on the beliefs which are derived from ancestoral faith in God. The advancement in various fields such as technology, medical , industries is all a result of science and is not related to religion in any aspect. Religion gives us a deep knowledge in spirituality which helps in introspection but not in proving experiments and theories.
Science is emperical and gives us facts and results based on experiments. NASA is a paragon for science. The various theories given by scientists are proven on the basis of facts which have been tested successfully. Religion is strong belief in God on the basis of faith. If Science will be related to religion then all theories should be in continment with different kind of religions and thus the concept of Universal theories of Science will not stand true.
Let us consider another example of science, Television and computers. It is becuase of T.V. and social media that people are promoting their religion nowadays. So, religion is somewhat dependant on Science in this era. All the spiritual leaders are promoting their religion by communicating with their followers on social media and this is an epitome of how religion is dependent on Science.
In the end, I would conclude that Science has its own meaning and definitions which cannot be denied on the basis of any religion.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Science
...ion are two different prospects in life.Science is the study of physical and structural...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rious fields such as technology, medical , industries is all a result of science a...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'deep knowledge'.
Suggestion: deep knowledge
...ligion in any aspect. Religion gives us a deep knowledge in spirituality which helps in introspe...
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Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: DEPENDENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'dependent' on?
Suggestion: dependent
...gion nowadays. So, religion is somewhat dependant on Science in this era. All the spiritu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, thus, whereas, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 249.0 442.535393258 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07228915663 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87819109859 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 215.323595506 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534136546185 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 704.065955056 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.4628542362 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1538461538 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139091684777 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516145016019 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0211682752504 0.0758088955206 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895430218298 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150235740249 0.0667264976115 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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