Should there be an unified national curriculum throughout the country for schools? What do you think? state your claim and support with suitable examples.
The author is in favor of a generalized same national curriculum for the students throughout the country. And I support this choice as it will not only be beneficial for the children but also the parents and the administration for long run.
First of all, the students and their parents will be highly benefited from this choice.
Parents have to move their families often when they are transferred to new places in their jobs. With that comes the problem of getting their off springs in a new school. Those new schools may have different curriculum than previous one, so as a result the children have to struggle with the new curriculum. For e.g. in India, for exactly this problem, a school system named "Kendriya Vidyalaya Sangthan" was formed. It has multiple branches in different cities throughout the nation. It's main aim is to provide a same curriculum to the students whose parents move a lot due to work.
Additionally maintaining a national curriculum is quite beneficial for the country as a whole. For the education department of that country, it is easier to make important additions decisions or changes to a national curriculum instead of multiple different curriculum. It is also easier to track a singular system comparatively to other multiple smaller systems. We can see the instance of Central Board Of Education in India, which maintains its education standard and a unified syllabus throughout the country via central government.
Furthermore, it becomes quite easy for the college administration to judge the students during their college application process if they have same kind of educational background. With a similar background, the difference and inclination in any student's abilities and inclination is easy to notice. It leads to a sound judgement in an admit or reject of the college application of a student.
So finally I would say that there are quite some major benefits of having a same nationwide curriculum based on the points above. Even if there are differences in education styles and traditions among various states, it can easily be considered in the nationwide curriculum and adopted accordingly.
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'but', 'e.g.', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'as for', 'kind of', 'as a result', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.247395833333 0.240241500013 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.114583333333 0.157235817809 73% => OK
Adjectives: 0.106770833333 0.0880659088768 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0546875 0.0497285424764 110% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0494791666667 0.0444667217837 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127604166667 0.12292977631 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0260416666667 0.0406280797675 64% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.04295774482 2.79330140395 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0338541666667 0.030933414821 109% => OK
Particles: 0.00260416666667 0.0016655270985 156% => OK
Determiners: 0.119791666667 0.0997080785238 120% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.015625 0.0249443105267 63% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0078125 0.0148568991511 53% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2166.0 2732.02544248 79% => OK
No of words: 350.0 452.878318584 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.18857142857 6.0361032391 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.391428571429 0.366273622748 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.331428571429 0.280924506359 118% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.234285714286 0.200843997647 117% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.157142857143 0.132149295362 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04295774482 2.79330140395 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 219.290929204 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.48968727796 106% => OK
Word variations: 55.3532164153 55.4138127331 100% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.4210526316 23.380412469 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7386008789 59.4972553346 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 141.124799967 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4210526316 23.380412469 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.736842105263 0.674092028746 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 51.5639097744 51.4728631049 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.83333333333 1.64882698954 111% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236915118496 0.391690518653 60% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.122107286254 0.123202303941 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0919699275435 0.077325440228 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.549405547387 0.547984918172 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.20327225048 0.149214159877 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960862652646 0.161403998019 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617664590162 0.0892212321368 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.248965407157 0.385218514788 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0734759454055 0.0692045440612 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147160376215 0.275328986314 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622808380108 0.0653680567796 95% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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