Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them at an early age to develop their talents.
It is debatable whether society should recognize children with special talents and provide special training from when they are young. For a society to enhance greatly, it is a desirable system to nurture children's special talents at an early age.
To begin with, if a society identifies a child's special ability and go an extra mile to develop it from when a child is very young, it is more probable that a child's potential will be developed more effectively and powerfully. Although learning is a never ending process, there are some things that can be learned more effectively at an early age. It is especially true for areas that involve physical movements. Take Lionel Messi, a prominent Argentina soccer player, as an example. He started playing soccer at an early age; his special talent was recognized, so he specialized in soccer at the expense of attending formal schools. Eventually, he became one of the most influential, talented soccer player in the world. Had he not received training from an early age, he would have missed many critical points to develop his skills and might have become just a mediocre soccer player. Therefore, it is crucial for a society to identify and develop a child's talent from early age.
In addition, recognization of a gift of a child and providing training from when a child is young will be conducive to betterment of a society. Benefits of nurturing a talented individual does not end on a personal level, but such benefits can contribute to a society's enhancement. Most children go through lives that are monolithic; they generally receive education for 12 years or more and start working life after they finish school. Although formal education reaps a lot of advantages and is a crucial part of a society, a mix of color and tone is indispensible as well. Through active investigation program for a talented child and nurturing system from when a child is young will eventually yield more dynamics to a society. Such program will develop individuals with different, novel thoughts who can have immense synergic effects when combined with other individuals. Thus, society's training of talented children is needed.
Admittedly, there are some downside of the program. Society could be limiting those children with talents to only develop their recognized talents and deprive them of other options. It would be even more problematic if they have to find other option in the future when they quit what they were doing when they were young. As a matter of fact, it is a real issue for many musicians and atheletes. However, this does not mean a society should stop its identification and training program. Other options and methods would have to be developed to resolve problems occurred by early training since benefits of early training still overrides possible downside of it.
All in all, society ought to select those children with special gifts and provide early training for them because of aforementioned reasons.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: In addition, recognization of a gift of a child and providing training from when a child is young will be conducive to betterment of a society.
Error: recognization Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Although formal education reaps a lot of advantages and is a crucial part of a society, a mix of color and tone is indispensible as well.
Error: indispensible Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Such program will develop individuals with different, novel thoughts who can have immense synergic effects when combined with other individuals.
Error: synergic Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: As a matter of fact, it is a real issue for many musicians and atheletes.
Error: atheletes Suggestion: athletes
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arguments: Good
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.5 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 493 350
No. of Characters: 2430 1500
No. of Different Words: 238 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.712 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.929 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.696 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 187 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 155 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 92 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 51 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.542 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.483 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.417 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.306 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.489 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.119 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 28, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'downsides'?
Suggestion: downsides
... needed. Admittedly, there are some downside of the program. Society could be limiti...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'in addition', 'as a matter of fact', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.21706864564 0.240241500013 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.166975881262 0.157235817809 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.115027829314 0.0880659088768 131% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0538033395176 0.0497285424764 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0500927643785 0.0444667217837 113% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111317254174 0.12292977631 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0371057513915 0.0406280797675 91% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7553927541 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.025974025974 0.030933414821 84% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0853432282004 0.0997080785238 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0278293135436 0.0249443105267 112% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0222634508349 0.0148568991511 150% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2979.0 2732.02544248 109% => OK
No of words: 493.0 452.878318584 109% => OK
Chars per words: 6.04259634888 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.58838876751 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.391480730223 0.366273622748 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.316430020284 0.280924506359 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.210953346856 0.200843997647 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101419878296 0.132149295362 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7553927541 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 219.290929204 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486815415822 0.48968727796 99% => OK
Word variations: 56.4507938327 55.4138127331 102% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6194690265 116% => OK
Sentence length: 20.5416666667 23.380412469 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5070275174 59.4972553346 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.125 141.124799967 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5416666667 23.380412469 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.458333333333 0.674092028746 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 52.1846686951 51.4728631049 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.34931506849 1.64882698954 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402961615364 0.391690518653 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0954578306653 0.123202303941 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0742648402657 0.077325440228 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.450670498844 0.547984918172 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.177217201116 0.149214159877 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12694403909 0.161403998019 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107562743114 0.0892212321368 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.306378796773 0.385218514788 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0524911199217 0.0692045440612 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278666534944 0.275328986314 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948641702385 0.0653680567796 145% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.4325221239 182% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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