Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Many endangered species are facing extinction because of many factors among which human activities is one of the factor. We should make efforts to protect endangered species irrespective of whether they are caused only as a result of human activities.
For instance, consider the case of endangered species in the island uninhabited by humans. Some endangered species might be facing extinction as result of environmental changes like water pollution, global warming etc. Some endangered species might be facing extinction as a result of other species' activities. If there are many endangered species in that island, then it is better for us to protect them before they become extinct. Those endangered species should not be ignored as they are not facing extinction by human activities.
If efforts are made to protect only the species which are facing extinction because of human activities, then many species will extinct in the future. We might even lose those species which help mankind and nature in many ways. If many endangered species face extinction because of implementing this policy, then the species which prey on endangered species will also start facing extinction creating an extinction chain. If the extinction chain continues, then it will cause many difficulties for humans. Every species helps the nature in some way. The extinction of many species can create environmental changes making human survival difficult.
However, society can make efforts to save most of the endangered species which are facing extinction because of human activities because of the following reasons. The first reason is human activities can be controlled and is in the hands of humans unlike the natural calamities. The second reason is extinction caused by some unknown factors cannot be controlled by humans. The third reason is humans cannot control the species which are facing extinction because of other species like wild animals preying on domestic animals causing the extinction of deer.
Society should make efforts to save all endangered species though some of those species' extinction is not caused by human activities. If humans neglect many species as their extinction is not caused by humans, then it can lead to environmental degradation making everyone's survival difficult.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bited by humans. Some endangered species might be facing extinction as result of ...
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Line 5, column 507, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...ill cause many difficulties for humans. Every species helps the nature in some way. T...
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Line 7, column 375, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...factors cannot be controlled by humans. The third reason is humans cannot control t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, then, third, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 14.8657303371 13% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 359.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41225626741 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76037681668 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 215.323595506 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.378830083565 0.4932671777 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 615.6 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3267373147 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.263157895 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8947368421 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355903927083 0.243740707755 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162759088364 0.0831039109588 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761252902355 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263490782191 0.150359130593 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016684710024 0.0667264976115 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.38706741573 83% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.