The basic definition for ‘Ecosystem’ is a model in which each component is in some way linked to each other to function properly. Frequent interventions of external factors could deeply impact the functioning of the ecosystem which could result in complete failure of the whole system. However when endangered species in society is on the stage of potential extinction then, in my opinion, there should be at least some provision, although it is caused as the result of human activities or not they should at least be some sort of help from human, for the following few reasons.
To begin with, most of the causal effects on the ecosystem are due to humans, as homo-sapiens are the most advanced species in terms of cerebral limits. So when an endangered species is on the verge of extinction there should be some help provided in order to protect them. In 2008 there was an extensive research done on a mammal entitled ‘platypus’ as it was the only mammal alive that reproduced by giving eggs, as a result of extensive research activity plethora of platypus were killed for so-called ‘research purposes’. This incident of extinction was a direct result of human action and not until it was too late for the researchers to realize the effect, they decided to stop their research. Thus society should make efforts to save endangered species.
However, if the result of extinction is caused due to natural activities then it should be considered as the ecological process of species survival and evolution. In 1870 a scientist named Darwin proposed a theory entitled “Survival of the fittest”, according to this theory our ecosystem selects the species which have the highest will to survive and the lower ones get extinct. Although if this theory holds true there should be at least some provision provided for the potential species to survive at least for some more time.
Thus in my opinion, although it is caused as the result of human activities or not they should at least be some sort of help from humans.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Suggestion: Thus,
...survive at least for some more time. Thus in my opinion, although it is caused as...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, thus, as to, at least, sort of, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 343.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93586005831 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76200255741 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481049562682 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.1114705268 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.083333333 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5833333333 23.4991977007 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.21951772744 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239466052216 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100403484478 0.0831039109588 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060224221392 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147321703997 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035974731039 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.