Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take

Since the industrialization of the human society, building new factories and fast growth of the human population bring a lot of concequenses, and the problem with the endangered species have sharpened and rised a lof of discussion aroud this topic. People’s action effect the ecosystems of forests, lakes, oceans and cause extinction of a lot of animals. Therefore, the author’s proposal seems rights, but still I’m not fully agree with it. The author suggests to put maximum effors to save this endangered species which depletion was caused by the human’s ativities. The proposed criteria ca...

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 468, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggests putting'.
Suggestion: suggests putting
...s;m not fully agree with it. The author suggests to put maximum effors to save this endangered ...
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Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...tort the whole system. The cause of the some consequences could be an evolution and ...
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Line 3, column 741, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...xactly cause extinction of a species is a unbearable issue. Secondly, an ecosy...
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Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...nts. This chains embody how animals are depend of each other. As a result of missing o...
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Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'effort'?
Suggestion: effort
.... Finally, people need to make a big efforts to save species and undertand how to do...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, as a result, first of all, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2511.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 486.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06523939692 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506172839506 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 783.9 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3306833749 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.571428571 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61904761905 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227156182158 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710028410852 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537610636387 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13355246664 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284396796203 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 100.480337079 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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