Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Children in school are taught about different animals that are present on earth as a part of their curriculum, what they are not taught are the number of animals that have gone extinct as a result of human activities. We all know about the "Dodo", a bird which is now extinct. It is due to the human invaders, who started residing in these islands, which the Dodo once inhabited, and as a result the Dodos were killed and slaughtered by the new settlers. Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of these species is the result of human activities. In my opinion, such a statement is incomplete, and that, all endangered species should be saved irrespective of them being at the brink of extinction as a result of human activities or no.
There is no hiding from the fact that we humans are a greedy breed of animals. We stop at nothing in order to achieve what we want, and feeling the brunt of such an attitude are the animals. The greed for money has encouraged many poachers to kill elephants for the ivory that can be retrieved form them. It is not just the poachers who are guilty of committing such a sin, but the opulent as well. The fantasies that these rich possess, such as animal skin or animal fur has led to the killing of many animals so that the ends of the rich people are met. In all these instances, it is the animals that are paying the price, with their life. Tigers are now considered as an endangered species and such a dire situation has occurred due to the penchant of rich people for carpets made up of animal skin. All these malpractices should be shunned immediately and corrective actions should be taken in order to reverse the declining numbers of endangered species.
It is necessary to take such actions because the extinction of one species of animal can lead to a devastating chain effect that can hamper the normal livelihood of the humans as well. Imagine if the actions of us humans have led to the extinction of a crucial animal such as the elephants. In such a case, a large part of the predator's source of food will be absent from their diet. This would lead to scarcity of food for them and the extinction of the predators as well. This is one discernible ill-effects of animal extinction. There are various other variables that would come into play which might lead to the extinction of human-beings as well. If we want to make sure that such an adverse situation does not occur, it is high time that we humans become aware and take corrective actions to save all endangered species, irrespective of them being in such a situation due to human negligence or no.
Often times, these animals act as symbols and represent certain countries. For example, Bangladesh is represented by the tiger whereas India is represented by a peacock. If in case we assume that tigers have gone extinct from Earth. This would mean that a country has lost it's symbol and the kids studying there will grow up to discover that the symbol of their country has been wiped out from the face of the Earth. Future generations will eventually forget about the animal that represented their country and a crucial piece of history would be lost into oblivion.
In sum, I feel that the above mentioned statement is incomplete, regarding the measures that need to be taken in order to save endangered species. In my opinion, it is the moral duty of an human to reverse the sins committed by him, not in order to be on the good side of karma, but to make sure that the human race does not bring upon itself, the deleterious ramifications, which can be caused due to the extinction of endangered species.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 171, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...reas India is represented by a peacock. If in case we assume that tigers have gone...
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Line 9, column 187, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... In my opinion, it is the moral duty of an human to reverse the sins committed by ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, well, whereas, for example, i feel, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 38.0 19.5258426966 195% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.3162921348 221% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 58.0 33.0505617978 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 93.0 58.6224719101 159% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3029.0 2235.4752809 135% => OK
No of words: 655.0 442.535393258 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62442748092 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.05894927669 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63145792845 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 215.323595506 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.410687022901 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 964.8 704.065955056 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1112173358 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.185185185 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2592592593 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.51851851852 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187904336079 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584615636599 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890598039372 0.0758088955206 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115408576259 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088971673245 0.0667264976115 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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