Some people argue that successful leaders in government, industry, or other fields must be highly competitive. Other people claim that in order to be successful, a leader must be willing and able to cooperate with others.
It is always in the best interest of the society to produce good leaders from the young so that the country moves along nicely and prosperously. But the big debate is not whether one requires a good leader but what are the earmarks of a good leader and how to produce them or in other words how can you produce them in a factory and what must be the way to manufacture them and what attributes are required, cooperation vs. competition, is the main agenda. It is quite natural to see that cooperation might be the key for success, however competition is the hidden recipe indeed.
No matter the field, there is always some great personalities who are willing and capable to come forward as a good result but not all of them achieve the final milestone. To keep their head always in the game to kick start their campaign towards greatness both in terms of personal and national the sense of competition is most. Without competition not only human but every living soul tends to be smug. They feel as they have done enough and there is no desire to go beyond the boundary.
After all it is all about who is willing to take that extra mile and the sense of competition just provides the boost for that. We can see the same in case of Leo Messi and Cristiano Ronaldo two of the greatest footballer of our generation. They are so fierce in outshining each other that they inadvertly keep on raising the level of their own game. As a result both the club and country benefits from this outlandish competition and personal feat.
Moving on from football, Ferrari and Lamborgini two of the best cars maker. What makes them a class apart from the others? What drives them to amuse and amaze us years after year, with the new cutting edge technology that gives a pleasure just having a thought of someday owning them? The answer is simple its competition. They have come forward as the leaders in the automobile innovations and development.
Of course! Developing leadership through co-operation seems appealing, by creating harmonious and congruous environment a sound and convivial leader is produced but the problem with such is lack of intent, inability to take risk and keep on moving forward, Driving everyone forward against all odds. That is the quality, which can only be developed by inflicting the sense of competitions.
In the nutshell, the sense of competition is what makes a good leader who can take important decisions. No matter how appealing the cooperation may seem, competition is the final recipe a society needs to put in the young’s to make them better. As all great personality thrive on good and healthy competition and the best result always comes when competing with the best.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, may, so, after all, apart from, of course, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2247.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 472.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76059322034 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63742425768 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 700.2 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9017853032 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.136363636 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4545454545 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150508668558 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396712759084 0.0831039109588 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418635460894 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754874802527 0.150359130593 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510530714988 0.0667264976115 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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