Some people argue that successful leaders in government, industry, or other fields must be highly competitive. Other people claim that in order to be successful, a leader must be willing and able to cooperate with others.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Competition juxtaposes with cooperation, will make a good example for society. We need competition among the young generation, but when there is a situation when everyone needs for better life, then cooperation is a must. The prompt suggests that to be a successful leader, the young generation of any sector ( industry, government or any other field) has to be competitive. In my opinion, I mostly disagree with this suggestion and argue with three reasons that competition and cooperation both need to maintain successful leadership.
To begin with, today for the betterment of our nation we need cooperation among young people rather than being competitive. Currently, the whole world is completely in a hodgepodge situation, which lead the human to its end. As today's climate change is a big issue, and people all over the world r worried about its future, about all the living animals' future. So, if the young generation could not come together as one, the future of the world is in peril. So cooperation is a must component for the betterment of the society, nations or the world.
In addition, without cooperation, no nation can survive or will in the near future. If in the time of the Freedom fight of Bangladesh in 1971 the whole nation did not come together or the nation's leaders did not call everyone to fight for their nation then maybe there is no Bangladesh among other nations on the world map. Cooperation for a good life is valuable.
Further, some reason like invention, if there is no competition or the voracity to know more about the world of science. The young generation could not discover or invent new findings for their future generation. if Newton did not invent the gravitational force theory, may new invention could not be invented after that, which makes today's life easier.
Of course, some people argue that to be a good example for young generation leaders have to be competitive with each other. But, if they only are competitive rather being cooperative. I think they forgot the history, where the answer is written.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, as to, i think, in addition, of course, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 12.9106741573 209% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 347.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95389048991 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76800815197 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50144092219 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9269640502 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2777777778 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255433870453 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800191150139 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964077852324 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148016973039 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909966064124 0.0667264976115 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.