the map below show the village of stokeford in1930 and 2010. summarise the information and make comparison where relevant.
The map illustrates that in 80 years the changes took place in the village of stokford .
Overall, The village faced a huge development from 1930 to 2010, Farmland all over the village decreased and most of them turned into the residential area.
The map depicted that, the bizarre land from 1930 of the north-eastern side changed to farmland in 2010 and some new residential houses exist now. Also, the western side of the village had shops which are replaced by the houses. The primary school beside the river hade one building only, in 2010 is modified into U-shaped two building Also beside the primary school, there were a few houses, which have more houses in 2010.
Furthermore, The retirement house has more houses in 2010 and less land for the garden. The immediate opposite side of the stoke river used to have farmlands, which is used as a residential area in 2010.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
...es took place in the village of stokford . Overall, The village faced a huge de...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... them turned into the residential area. The map depicted that, the bizarre land ...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... garden. The immediate opposite side of the stoke river used to have farmlands, which is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 733.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82236842105 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46987920801 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598684210526 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7866760592 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.714285714 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131474907681 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645396793431 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256467886153 0.0843802449381 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0869042794272 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193705377078 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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