Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate.
Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Of late, the society is polarised into two groups almost equally regarding the notion that whether, corporate governance should take the responsibility for the well being of the societies and environments in which they operate or, the only responsibility of corporation is that they make much money as possible in under the law. In my opinion, if corporations want to do or give something to the society then they are not losing their profit, moreover, they will get the
better response from the society.
I agree with the first notion for the various reasons. The first and foremost, company is not run only with the help of Directors or CEO, it also depends on the maneuver employees or labours. So company should try to promote social contribution to the employees. For instance, Reliance Oil Refinery at Jamnagar provides
free accommodation , free education for their children, medical insurance and many more benefits to the employees as well as their family. As a results company gets more support from the worker and after all company reaches it goals and earns the more profit.
Secondly, when corporation take social responsibility and help to society will repay back in their long term run and also win the trust from the society. For example, a massive shoe manufacturing company BATA hired unskilled and unemployed workers for the some places of factory. Train them and make a skilled workers.
By done this they got the more profit as well as establish the good example of social contribution. This not only benefited to the company it also lifted up those worker form underprivileged to privileged lifestyle and decrease the unemployment level upto some extent for that perticular region.
However, some people think that well being of the society is the only responsibility of the government and corporation only focus on their profit and development of the company. The GDP of the country also depends on the revenue of the company. When corporation generates much more money then government should take more tax from them and its help to the nation. Government allocats the fund for the social activities, public welfare etc., so some people believe that to avoid
the misuse of this fund, only government should take the responsibility of the social contribution.
It can be concluded that, it is not only liability of government for the welfare and well being of the society , corporation should involve to the social contribution. With balance of both the corporation and government, we create well design of the nation. Giant corporate companies makes the more money and profit so they try to contribute to society for their own sake also, in addtion they nothing to lose to well being of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, after all, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2290.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 452.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06637168142 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81941509481 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466814159292 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 722.7 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3766853484 60.3974514979 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.526315789 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7894736842 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52631578947 5.21951772744 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.97078651685 181% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312992108256 0.243740707755 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928304899687 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10082769032 0.0758088955206 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136275423101 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105842299561 0.0667264976115 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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