The following appeared as a letter to the editor from a Central Plaza store owner.
"Over the past two years, the number of shoppers in Central Plaza has been steadily decreasing while the popularity of skateboarding has increased dramatically. Many Central Plaza store owners believe that the decrease in their business is due to the number of skateboard users in the plaza. There has also been a dramatic increase in the amount of litter and vandalism throughout the plaza. Thus, we recommend that the city prohibit skateboarding in Central Plaza. If skateboarding is prohibited here, we predict that business in Central Plaza will return to its previously high levels."
This memo is about complain that use of skatboards in the central plazza, Store owners in Central Plazza claims that popularity of skateboarding numbers of shoppers decreasing. So, store owners conclude that the city prohibit skateboarding in the Plazza. To support this conclusion the owners show that it increase in the amount of litter and vandalism throughtout the Plazza. However, dose scrutiny of this evidence make any sense? Can we suppose that skateboarding harmful to the growth of the shops in Plazza? So, complain of owner may be unconvincing.
Firstly, Store owners tell that over the past two years, the numbers of customers steadilly decreasing, from where skateboarding is become popular in the Central Plazza. But, there is no any evidence about the in which numbers of skateboards are in use, if they provide the numbers then it claim become thoughtful. If
numbers of skateboard users are much more than may be city take any action. Also they donot provide any specific argument that their business is ruin through the skateboarding.
Secondly, Owners blame that skateboarding vandalise the Plazza and aslo increase the amout of litter in the Central Plazza. But, here also they fail to give such an incident which support their argument. May be skateboard made from the plastic materials and it doses not able to harm such an any shops. In this
complain memo there is no specification about the what numbers of skateboards are used. Also in the what period of time the users use the skateboards and shopkeeprs face any trouble.
Lastly, are there any customers who complain against the skateboarders? so, they face any trouble during the shopping. On what basis owner compain that skateboard must be prohibit. There is not such an evidence that if city prohibit on the skateboard then the business lost recover and they will start the gain profit again.
It can be concluded that for supporting the complain against the skateboard owners should provide strong evidence against the skateboarders. Also in memo we donot see that who are the skateboarders and who are use it on daily basis. They are any customers or the any workers od the centeral plazza or may be the owner, this is not clarify. So, on what basis and to whom against complaint take, may be it the question for the city Police.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 389 350
No. of Characters: 1880 1500
No. of Different Words: 167 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.441 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.833 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.652 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 126 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 96 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 64 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.208 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.886 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.708 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.332 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.581 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.169 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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This memo is about complain th...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Shoppers
...opularity of skateboarding numbers of shoppers decreasing. So, store owners conclude t...
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... the owners show that it increase in the amount of litter and vandalism throughto...
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... owners show that it increase in the amount of litter and vandalism throughtout the...
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...t skateboarding harmful to the growth of the shops in Plazza? So, complain of ow...
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...mplain of owner may be unconvincing. Firstly, Store owners tell that over the...
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Line 11, column 165, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...e skateboarding is become popular in the Central Plazza. But, there is no any evi...
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...in the Central Plazza. But, there is no any evidence about the in which numbers...
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...se, if they provide the numbers then it claim become thoughtful. If numbers of ska...
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Line 13, column 164, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...bers then it claim become thoughtful. If numbers of skateboard users are much mor...
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... then it claim become thoughtful. If numbers of skateboard users are much more than ...
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Suggestion: Also,
... more than may be city take any action. Also they donot provide any specific argumen...
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Line 15, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... that their business is ruin through the skateboarding. Secondly, Ow...
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Suggestion: Skateboarding
...t their business is ruin through the skateboarding. Secondly, Owners blame th...
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Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...is ruin through the skateboarding. Secondly, Owners blame that skateboardin...
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Line 19, column 163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...tral Plazza. But, here also they fail to give such an incident which support thei...
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... Plazza. But, here also they fail to give such an incident which support their ar...
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... able to harm such an any shops. In this complain memo there is no specification ...
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...e to harm such an any shops. In this complain memo there is no specification about th...
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... skateboards are used. Also in the what period of time the users use the skateboards and shopk...
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...users use the skateboards and shopkeeprs face any trouble. Lastly, ...
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...s use the skateboards and shopkeeprs face any trouble. Lastly, are ...
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... and shopkeeprs face any trouble. Lastly, are there any customers who comp...
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Suggestion: So
...who complain against the skateboarders? so, they face any trouble during the shopp...
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Line 27, column 163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...opping. On what basis owner compain that skateboard must be prohibit. There is no...
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Suggestion: Skateboard
...ng. On what basis owner compain that skateboard must be prohibit. There is not such an ...
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Line 29, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...over and they will start the gain profit again. It can be concluded...
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... and they will start the gain profit again. It can be concluded that...
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...will start the gain profit again. It can be concluded that for supporting ...
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...It can be concluded that for supporting the complain against the skateboard owners should pr...
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...ainst the skateboarders. Also in memo we donot see that who are the skateboarder...
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Line 35, column 49, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
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Suggestion: who is a are
... see that who are the skateboarders and who are use it on daily basis. They are any cus...
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Line 37, column 13, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
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Suggestion: clarified
...azza or may be the owner, this is not clarify. So, on what basis and to whom against ...
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Line 37, column 76, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
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Suggestion: maybe
...sis and to whom against complaint take, may be it the question for the city Police.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 13.6137724551 140% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 28.8173652695 115% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 55.5748502994 85% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1973.0 2260.96107784 87% => OK
No of words: 389.0 441.139720559 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07197943445 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72768450388 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 204.123752495 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.426735218509 0.468620217663 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 705.55239521 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2195051317 57.8364921388 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7826086957 119.503703932 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9130434783 23.324526521 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4347826087 5.70786347227 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 5.15768463074 291% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 34.0 5.25449101796 647% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174228473325 0.218282227539 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602879082784 0.0743258471296 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718600460224 0.0701772020484 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796338399168 0.128457276422 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713738499499 0.0628817314937 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.3799401198 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.3550499002 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.197005988 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.5979740519 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.32208582834 92% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 98.500998004 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 12.3882235529 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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