According to the British "Financial Times" reported on Wednesday, after Plaza designers supported the Hong Kong protests in Instagram posts, Nike stopped selling a series of sports shoes in China.POULSBO - 13 years after Silverdale provided holistic healthy pet food and products, Naturally 4 Paws opened a second store to serve the county's four furry friends.
The new small boutique shop is located in Poulsbo Central Plaza and opened on Saturday. Similar to the flagship store, the new location Central offer meat and bone soup from the local farm and freshly baked snacks from the owner's own Paws Gourmet Bakery.Hall said that Poulsbo's location Central be the first pet store in Western Washington with an in-house kitchen.Of course, 4 Paws manually selects products for local and small businesses. “We don't buy anything we feel bad about,” says resource manager Corri Langlois.
Six years ago, Langlois began working at Naturally 4 Paws after studying nutrition. She said she was passionate about her overall health and applied it to her customers. Skateboard use dehydrated meat in Naturally 4 Paws. Poulsbo's new Naturally 4 Paws restaurant specializes in providing raw and fresh food to pets. Skateboard use dehydrated meat in Naturally 4 Paws. Poulsbo's new Naturally 4 Paws restaurant specializes in providing raw and fresh food to pets. (Photo: ISABELLA BREDA / KITSAP SUN)
"Your intuition is the foundation of your health. To take care of your entire life, you must have good nutrition."Opened in 2006, this popular pet health food store's mission is to provide healthy eating and pet owner relationships for the host and pet.
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
wrong topics or wrong content
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 267 350
No. of Characters: 1340 1500
No. of Different Words: 164 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.042 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.019 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.559 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 97 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 82 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.538 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 17.345 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.154 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.372 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.61 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.145 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hall
...from the owners own Paws Gourmet Bakery.Hall said that Poulsbos location Central be ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Of
...ern Washington with an in-house kitchen.Of course, 4 Paws manually selects product...
^^
Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...or local and small businesses. 'We dont buy anything we feel bad about,' s...
^^^^
Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...s;We dont buy anything we feel bad about,' says resource manager Corri Langlois. ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.6327345309 25% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.9520958084 8% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 13.6137724551 7% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 28.8173652695 45% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 55.5748502994 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 2260.96107784 62% => OK
No of words: 262.0 441.139720559 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3893129771 5.12650576532 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.56307096286 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97652083959 2.78398813304 107% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 204.123752495 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63358778626 0.468620217663 135% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 705.55239521 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 19.7664670659 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 106.661555867 57.8364921388 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.666666667 119.503703932 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 23.324526521 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.70786347227 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139780877502 0.218282227539 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468482600915 0.0743258471296 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503523570609 0.0701772020484 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821667926625 0.128457276422 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062708753016 0.0628817314937 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.3799401198 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.5979740519 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.32208582834 113% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 98.500998004 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 12.3882235529 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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