Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate.
Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Of late, the society is polarised into two groups almost equally regarding the notion that whether, corporate governance should take the responsibility for the well being of the societies and environments in which they operate or, the only responsibility of corporation is that they make much money as possible in under the law. In my opinion, if corporations want to do or give something to the society then they are not losing their profit, moreover, they will get the better response from the society.
I agree with the first notion for the various reasons. The first and foremost, company is not run only with the help of Directors or CEO, it also depends on the maneuver employees or labours. So company should try to promote social contribution to the employees. For instance, Reliance Oil Refinery at Jamnagar provides free accommodation , free education for their children, medical insurance and many more benefits to the employees as well as their family. As a results company gets more support from the worker and after all company reaches it goals and earns the more profit.
It can be concluded that, it is not only liability of government for the welfare and well being of the society , corporation should involve to the social contribution. With balance of both the corporation and government, we create well design of the nation. Giant corporate companies makes the more money and profit so they try to contribute to society for their own sake also, in addtion they nothing to lose to well being of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, well, after all, for instance, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 2235.4752809 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 257.0 442.535393258 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97276264591 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74934382888 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560311284047 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 704.065955056 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.8294728032 60.3974514979 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.8 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2 5.21951772744 234% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292252606737 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105651307894 0.0831039109588 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115700927664 0.0758088955206 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215975717672 0.150359130593 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142564965749 0.0667264976115 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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