Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
There are various companies and corporations that operate in a country and give the countries, various positive effects as well as a few negative side effects. On the positive side, more companies is directly related to a larger job market, and higher amount of taxes collected by these companies. On the flip side, there are negative side effects as well, such as, pollution and a higher exploitation of available resources. As a result, some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well being of the societies and environments in which they operate, where as, others believe that the sole responsibility of a corporation, given that they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible. I agree with the former, on the grounds that our world has faced large scale exploitation at the hands of human-beings. Therefore, corporations should now focus on saving the environment and helping the society in which they operate.
We humans are well aware of the fact that the world temperatures are rising at unprecedented levels and the icebergs in the Arctic Ocean have started to disappear altogether. Owing to such an adversity, it the responsibility of larger corporations to look for ways in which global warming can be reduced. Multi-national companies such as Google, Amamzon and Microsoft have all pledged towards making their companies go carbon-neutral in the following years. Each company has a different time-scale to achieve it, but their willingness to protect the world is commendable. Moreover, all these activities to protect the world is not hampering their revenue. By agreeing to protect the world, these companies will help reduce the rising temperatures and buy the people of this planet, a few more years to live.
Smaller companies may find it difficult to achieve such a feet, but they can operate on a smaller level and help the societies that they are present in. For example, a company that makes fitness products can organize a free medical camp for the people of their locality. In doing so, they will encourage the people to get their medical check-up done and also they can advertise their products in these medical camps. With such an approach, the people in the society will be satisfied by the steps taken by the company, and may also buy the products manufactured by the company. This results in an advantage for both the groups involved, the people will know about their body and whether it is working properly, and the company gets a platform to advertise their product, there by bringing in further revenue.
Proponents of the latter claim might argue that the companies should focus more upon making money since it ensures that the country is collecting more taxes and the company is producing new job positions at their firm. I agree with such an assertion, but the current world scenario begs us to look at ways to protect the environment, failing to do so will lead to disastrous consquences in the future. Moreover, the measures suggested above, or that have been already implemented by companies, does not hinder their normal functioning, hence, people need not worry about the lack of jobs or the lack of taxes being collected.
In sum, I am a strong advocate of the statement that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well being of the societies and environments in which they operate. In my opinion, it is the right time for humans to think about saving the environment from human exploitation, and the companies have adequate resorces to mitigate the threat, posed by global warming.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 583, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...and environments in which they operate, where as, others believe that the sole responsib...
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Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a foot' or simply 'feet'?
Suggestion: a foot; feet
...s may find it difficult to achieve such a feet, but they can operate on a smaller leve...
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Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: FOOT_FEET[1]
Message: 'foot' is the singular form of 'feet'. Consider using 'foot'?
Suggestion: foot
...may find it difficult to achieve such a feet, but they can operate on a smaller leve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3000.0 2235.4752809 134% => OK
No of words: 598.0 442.535393258 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01672240803 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94510247834 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85838933544 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 215.323595506 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453177257525 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 946.8 704.065955056 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7965924837 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.363636364 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314492532773 0.243740707755 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957961020315 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154814570058 0.0758088955206 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182760030173 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136673664725 0.0667264976115 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 100.480337079 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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