The sense of cooporation-social responsibility is rising global in recent years. Someone argues that private companies should contribute in improving social welfares and conserving environment in which they located, while other claims that businesses should only focus on making money. being profit-oriented is surely justificable at the first glance if you just consider short-term benefits, but contributing for the communities and environments is definitely more beneficial in long term.
it is the fact that coorporations not only earning money, but also paying a lot, such as taxes and legislation fees. In some nations, companies especially the one in highly-polluted industries such as power plants and manufacturing factories are charged with environmental-compensation tax by the authority, which is quite a hugh amount. In France and Germany, public transport operators are requested to provided discounted tickets to local residents. private businesses are somehow already paying back to the society and it is understood that why don't they willing to bear up more responsibilities.
while society and nature need funds from private coorporations, those companies also need resources and supports from the communities too. Revenues of retail shops especially which selling luxurious products highly rely on the level of social well-being of the place. if the citizens in such area are mostly employed and earning averagely high, they are much affordable and likely to buy non-essential products. private coorporations could help improving residents' lives by donating to charities and organisations which assist in job seeking. water dam developers could investigate in water lives preserving so as to ensure the water quality. private organisations pay money to the society, at the same time, they gain benefits from the nature too.
Promoting coorporation-society responsibilities is vital as it encourages a consistent development of the industry. For instance, the business of fishing farms are solely rely on the resorces in the sea, which are not infinitely provided. if they don't put efforts in preserving animals and cleaning water quality, the sea resources would be used up one day and the industry will not longer survive. natural resources used up is not something that could by guaranteed or promised by just obeying the laws. if every companies ignore the environmental and social needs and push all the responsibilities to the government, the authourity might not be able to tackle it. A vicious cycle would be caused and speed up the industry to decline.
being a responsible business, it must be kind to its potential customers and the affected nature. Perhaps shaping up an image of being social-responsible, more customers would admire your company and spend more in your stores. you will always get rewarded if you being nice to others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, while, as to, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2435.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 443.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49661399549 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40828187015 2.79657885939 122% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571106094808 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 769.5 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.952199509 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.681818182 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1363636364 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.04545454545 5.21951772744 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19255781764 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504322855026 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365478159469 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100414139362 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235747557107 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 100.480337079 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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