Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The two views presented above are strikingly ironical in comparison with each other. The former view takes into consideration the enhancement and overall development of a locality, region, which is brought about by the logical responsibility of the respective corporations. The latter view is most likely made by a greedy person whose sole intention is to amass and accumulate wealth in moral and ethical ways. Of the two views presented , I agree with the former ideology.
Firstly, with the turn of the decade a lot of pressure has been mounted on big corporations for planning and achieving a holistic approach towards the society. The establishment of huge and grandiose factories in any part of the world tremendously bolsters the economic and social activity of the region. For example, When Amul built is major factory in a rural village in the state of Gujrat, the ramifications of this step is seen today. The establishment of big factory of a corporation provides many job opportunities for the locals. It increases tourism, which in turn increases the need for a robust transportation system. This leads to an overall change in the landscape and the lives of the locals, which promotes their overall development and also has many positive effects.
Moreover the recent changes in the mindsets of individuals towards the operating and management of corporations and big companies has seen a drastic change. As opposed to earlier times, nowadays a lot of importance is being laid on the reciprocity that occurs between the employer and the employee, in general the common man. The current generation focuses more on the practical aspects, rather than adopting a bookish approach. This in turn puts more emphasis on the companies, so that they ensure that their employees and the customers that they serve are always kept satisfied.
The ideology that the sole intention and purpose of the corporations was only to mint and amass wealth is an outdated one. Even though the practices and methods adopted by the companies may be ethical, at the end of the day it is the organizations responsibility to ensure that while money-making is important for financial reasons, it cannot supplement it by getting away with what was normal and accepted until now.
In conclusion, the examples and points of views stated and mentioned above restate my support and favor towards the first argument. The best case scenario for a huge corporation is to collectively think about both the ideas and try to strike a balance between both of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2128.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 418.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93944869351 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55023923445 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0024249841 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.222222222 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14612717133 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373439937086 0.0831039109588 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033609049104 0.0758088955206 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0686750583529 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300300413113 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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