Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
It is the responsibility of corporations to have successful sales in order to grow financially. However, they should not resort to immoral actions to achieve these goals because using this approach does not guarantee a long term success. Therefore, I agree with the claim that corporations have to prioritize well-being of the society and environment in which they operate over the monetary profits. My viewpoints are aptly illustrated through the below mentioned examples.
Firstly, corporations can have a huge impact on the general population. Since their products are being used on a large scale by the people, therefore it is their responsibility to ensure the well being of the environment and the people. For instance, consider an automobile engine factory which produces excellent quality of sports cars. Since, the demand of cars has increased in the recent years, therefore the company may become greedy and thus increase the production of their cars, by not keeping a check on the amount of pollution that it causes. In such cases, although their sales would increase temporarily, but in the long term they would have to face several complains from the people of the nearby vicinity about the problems they are suffering due to the smoke that is released from these industries. This could later result in the downfall of the corporation. Thus, in order to ensure a long term success, the company needs to cater to the needs of the people ,while keeping a check on the harmful effects that can be caused due to their actions on the environment.
However, in contrast to the above statement, one cannot ignore the fact that without profits, the corporation would not be financially stable. Further, increasing the profits is essential for them to put up a strong fight in a competitive market environment. Provided, that there is no harm being produced to the society or the environment, a company can have the aim to make as much money as possible. If the corporation is making products that are designed for the well being of society, then an increase in amount of sales would ensure the corporation's significant contribution to the development of the society. For instance, consider a corporation that sells products such as designer cloth bags. Thus, if they aim to make as much money as possible, then this in turn suggests that more people are inclined towards buying environment friendly products instead of plastic based items which are difficult to decompose and thus produce undesirable consequences in the society. Therefore, it is equally important for the company to make as much money as possible as in some scenarios it would indirectly lead to the well-being of society.
To sum up, it is necessary for any corporation to prioritize the well-being of the society and environment as it can guarantee a long term success. However, if the company is producing items are that are not violating any rules, then having the aim to increase profits ,can indirectly suggest the development of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in contrast, such as, in contrast to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2531.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 500.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.062 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72870804502 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88245659117 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 800.1 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8055181401 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.55 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.21951772744 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261913837559 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816913348587 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769505403101 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173021635994 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627430400049 0.0667264976115 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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