Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Regarding artists, financial support by the government there are two confliction views. On the one hand, a host of people rest on the belief that it can encourage artists and cultivate the societies' culture in the favor of art. But on the other hand, some others believe that not only it is not productive, but also it might threaten the real value of art. In what follow, first the justification of each side is delineated, later on my personal perspective, having been inspired by the rationale of each side is explicated.
Supporting artists is considered to be one of the top priorities of the government since if the government does not allocate sufficient budget to the realm of art, most art producers will inevitably choose a secondary job. Due to the very nature of the art, which require delicate soul and meticulous attention, if artists are not financially insured and look for another profession, the result will be some pieces of art which are not authentic and do not reflect the real emotion of the producer.
On the other hand, it is established beyond doubt that the main purpose of the art works produce by artists is introduction of culture and life of people in different era. In fact, if the government support the artists, it might impose its value upon the piece of art produced by the artists. That being so, the real value of the art, which is expression of artists feeling, is questioned more simply. As a matter of fact, the interference of the government might not be always productive.
Personally, I lodge myself somewhere between these two views. If the government completely ignore artists, this negligence will inevitably suppress their talent that would be nurtured the otherwise and bring about prosperity for a given society. However, it should be also pointed out that the government budget is limited and it might not be able to patronize all major of arts. That being so, the government should strike a balance. It is better to allocate budget to those field of arts, which are more critical for a society and make some private organizations responsible for supporting those field which are deemed to be less critical.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'regarding', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'in fact', 'as a matter of fact', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221674876847 0.240241500013 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.152709359606 0.157235817809 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0738916256158 0.0880659088768 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0689655172414 0.0497285424764 139% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0320197044335 0.0444667217837 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130541871921 0.12292977631 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0467980295567 0.0406280797675 115% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76952170466 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0172413793103 0.030933414821 56% => OK
Particles: 0.00492610837438 0.0016655270985 296% => OK
Determiners: 0.12315270936 0.0997080785238 124% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0270935960591 0.0249443105267 109% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0172413793103 0.0148568991511 116% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2172.0 2732.02544248 80% => OK
No of words: 368.0 452.878318584 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90217391304 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.326086956522 0.366273622748 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.255434782609 0.280924506359 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.190217391304 0.200843997647 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141304347826 0.132149295362 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76952170466 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 219.290929204 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.48968727796 102% => OK
Word variations: 53.2573460601 55.4138127331 96% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6194690265 73% => OK
Sentence length: 24.5333333333 23.380412469 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2167935233 59.4972553346 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.8 141.124799967 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5333333333 23.380412469 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.866666666667 0.674092028746 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 50.0768115942 51.4728631049 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.57281553398 1.64882698954 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.555981358171 0.391690518653 142% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.133064058819 0.123202303941 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.094136536359 0.077325440228 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.597401723917 0.547984918172 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.19380280252 0.149214159877 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.248410603526 0.161403998019 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976344231012 0.0892212321368 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.462464254743 0.385218514788 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.103696738487 0.0692045440612 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.398207689589 0.275328986314 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248992339166 0.0653680567796 38% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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