Political leaders are the people who devote their life for the wellfare of the people and nation. I agree with the speaker that the information must be withhold from the public unless thats necessary. However, the leader must have ability to decide wisely about which information to withhold and to disclose.
Firstly, political leaders are choosen and elected by the public people and they must wisely decide who can be the best leader for their community and nation. Not everyone who claims themselves as political leader are capable of handling the post. And those who are capable will surely work for the betterment of the nation. We can see many opponents will try to offend him/her , to defame their reputation and dismantle their operation. In such case, if the information gets disclosed about any of their plans then there is great chance of failure of that plan before its embryonic state. So, in such case withholding information is necessary .
Secondly,every political leaders have their own nature of dealing with the informations. That nature too affects in the development of the nation. For example,one of the country is plotting plans to destroy their enemies and they are doing it secretly. What happens if any of the political leaders or any representative person discloses information about it?? Their plans doesn`t become valid as the opponent can have knowledge about it and they try to defend themselves knowing that.RAther the result can be that they might get attacked before they could attack their enemy.
Some of the informations have to be secret. If something bad is about to happen and if that information can bring chaos and disturbance in the conditions of people then,it better be kept secret. Rather, the leader should work secretly to overcome the problems without consciousness of the public and be solved in time. That can prove them a better leader than by disclosing the information.
However, leaders should provide some clarity about their next plans and movements if that doesn`t hamper their plans since the plans are made for the people and should be effective for the people. They have right to know about the information that are concerned about their welfare.
In sum, although disclosing information can produce good impact, its has its negative impact too. However, effective results are seen when the informations are withholded and worked on it effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2032.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 394.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15736040609 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72380063308 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482233502538 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3879291589 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3636363636 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 5.21951772744 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236677775373 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840162223134 0.0831039109588 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672110209774 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146076720298 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796059475002 0.0667264976115 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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