Some people believe that scientific discoveries have given us a much better understanding of the world around us. Others believe that science has revealed to us that the world is infinitely more complex than we ever realized.
What could be said to be the best thing to has ever happened to humanity? The knowledge of science encompasses a lot and it is the basis in which all other schools of thought have depended on for centuries. The prompt recommends some individuals are of the opinions that findings by scientists have shaped our conceptuality of the existing world while others are dwelling in the complexity of the world around them. In my opinion, I mostly agree and suggests that scientific finding have revolutionized our thinking for the following reasons.
To those that argue the extreme and obscure nature of the world around us from the deduction of the scientific understanding are been too conclusive in their thinking. For instance, the existence of stars and asteroids revolving in space, the little knowledge on some of these planetary bodies are instances given to support their claim. Saying that, because this science still hasn’t provided a concrete and robust explanation on the existence and nature of these planetary bodies , so the world is still complex to a large extent. However, opponents failed to understand that centuries ago little or no knowledge was known about the existent of asteroids, not to talk of black holes. It is this little knowledge that has form the basis of our understanding of what we know today
On the other hand, evolution theories propounded by a different scientist in the past centuries have provided the basis of our understanding of human evolution. For instance, Darwin’s theory of evolution- stating our different human organs has revolutionized in the course of the past centuries. This theory further informed us on how human beings are able to live and exist in different parts of the world, with evidence in the homeostasis build-up of human beings.
In addition, the knowledge of the cure of diseases that have challenged human existence in the past. These diseases affect male and female, young and old, with no restriction. For example, the knowledge of science was highly instrumental in the elimination of smallpox, a deadly disease that has challenged us for centuries. Through these effects, we now have vaccines to combat other disease that might pose a threat to the general human race.
In conclusion, after considering both sides of the issue it is inevitably clear that scientific discoveries have reshaped our understanding of the world around us, which also form the basis of the understanding of other complex ideas yet explored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, well, while, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2100.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 408.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14705882353 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92367790093 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495098039216 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2451777081 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.25 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 5.21951772744 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251022301008 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805250447486 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727835830501 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15133937811 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653004199676 0.0667264976115 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.