Some people believe that scientific discoveries have given us a much better understanding of the world around us. Others believe that science has revealed to us that the world is infinitely more complex than we ever realized.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
There are some people who believe that scientific discoveries improved our understanding about our surrounded world, on the contrary, some state that that these discoveries ended up to the belief that the world is much more complicated than we expected. It is an indisputable fact that the more we discover new facts of the world the more undiscovered aspects will show up, however, I believe that scientific discoveries augmented our knowledge about our world.
To begin with, if we compare our accomplishments with our ancestors, we realize how much the quality of life improved in the recent decades. Taking electricity as an instance, there were many years that scientists struggled with people who underestimated the advantages electricity can have for the humankind. Besides the drawbacks of utilizing electricity and numerous other scientific discoveries, nobody in the current world, even the least developed areas can abandon this essential discovery.
Even if new discoveries bring up more convoluted challenges, the fear of facing them should not thwart the effort to make the most advantage of the current information and opening new doors of discoveries. The first time a spaceship was sent to the space, scientists and astronauts faced new difficulties which they never expected. These impediments not only never reduced their efforts, it also augmented it to reach a more profound understanding of their surroundings as well as find a way to mitigate these difficulties.
It is irrefutable that there are facts which can not be discovered at least for many years, but by a graduate discern of the happenings and following step by step accomplishments many of the worlds most cryptic phenomena’s can be discovered. By disheartening everyone and not trying to overcome these drawbacks, the world will show no development and will follow a stable path for years. Thank to scientist who had eager to new discoveries and ignored the hinders, the world is evolved to its current state and due to the myriad of new scientists compared to the past, this development will be even more accelerated.
In Conclusion, even new discoveries show new undiscovered facts of life, passion to solve the new mysteries will conducive to development of the world and by taking our ancestors into account, there are many banal facts right now which used to be considered as big mysteries in our past.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
...nded world, on the contrary, some state that that these discoveries ended up to the belie...
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Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'advantages'' or 'advantage's'?
Suggestion: advantages'; advantage's
...gled with people who underestimated the advantages electricity can have for the humankind....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, so, well, at least, in conclusion, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2034.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 387.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25581395349 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11311498129 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50645994832 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.3013389522 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.5 118.986275619 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.25 23.4991977007 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 5.21951772744 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190923520481 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761944837455 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771819222978 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109058682058 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889991158696 0.0667264976115 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 14.1392134831 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 48.8420337079 80% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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