To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Some people hold the idea that in order to understand the principal characteristics of the society, smaller cities have to be studied, on the contrary, the writer of the paragraph suggests that the features of the society can be most understood by investigating major cities. I profoundly support the statement of the writer because due to the population of the cities, more aspects can be examined in these areas.
Rural areas have always proved to preserve the cultural beliefs of a nation better than cities, however, the higher population of the cities allows researchers to find features in the cities which are absent in rural lives .The larger the city is, the more diverse cultures and backgrounds are available and these areas are the best option to compare these dissimilarities. In huge cities such as Newyork, with a myriad of different cultures, living styles and ideas, researchers have a larger pool of samples to examine in contrast to smaller cities which are more homogenous and a big portion of the are have the same beliefs and backgrounds.
In addition, stress and pressure in larger cities, usually shows the dark sides of the personality of people. Comparing to country sides, life in mega cities is more stressing and more affected by traffic, pollution and higher living expenses. The impact and the reactions to these stressing features can be examined more efficiently in people facing it rather that people with a more relaxing lifestyle.
Besides the population and stress, big cities are more modernized and there are numerous people who migrated to cities in order to pursue their ways of educational and career progress and many of these immigrants have rural backgrounds. This will give the investigators to have both rural and urban people under examination in contradiction to urban cities.
In summary, large cities contain the best pool of data for society research thank to their large population and diversity and besides these many options, the impact of stress and difficulties is more applied on urban people which shows a greater reaction. And finally due to the migration of people from small to big cities, large cities can also be researched to investigate the impacts of the cities on rural people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, however, if, so, in addition, in contrast, in summary, such as, in contrast to, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 370.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14864864865 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78018134791 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464864864865 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 23.0359550562 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.397637433 60.3974514979 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 190.5 118.986275619 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.0 23.4991977007 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9 5.21951772744 228% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0675888266786 0.243740707755 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03179172428 0.0831039109588 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027764621515 0.0758088955206 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0435349783283 0.150359130593 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029353149386 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 14.1392134831 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 48.8420337079 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.8971910112 235% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 11.2143820225 150% => OK
text_standard: 28.0 11.7820224719 238% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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