Some people believe that success in creative fields, such as painting, fiction writing, and
filmmaking, primarily requires hard work and perseverance. Others believe that such
success mainly requires innate talents that cannot be learned.
Practise is the key to success. Continous hard work and perseverance are required to achieve successs in any field be it creative fields such as painting, fiction writing and filmmaking.
Creative skills can be made perfect by practising regularly. For example, it is well known that people spend hours practising martial arts. Many succesful writers failed dozens times before producing a masterpiece. Nowadays, most of the schools have arts as major whose subject can be thought and marks are graded according to everyday performance. These schools helps people to learn technically and scientifically through practise. New generation painters and filmmakers make use of technical tools that becomes better by practicing.
Some people innate creative talent that help them in early career. But a person who is more hard working and dogged achieves more success through his continous practise. For example, Rohit Sharma, a dancing prodigy in Delhi had innate talent but he was not much focussed and serious towards his career achieved some success but later faded as he could not keep upto date with new dancing forms. On the other hand, Shikhar Dhawan who was not able to dance until he was five year old due to some illness, and later discarded by many local talent shows stay focussed, worked hard every day and now is one of the most reputed dancer in Indian movies industry.
Furthermore, Looking at careers of actors or other creative people who are regarded as connisuer. All of them have one thing in common perservere towards their field. For example, Aamir Khan and Irrfan Khan who are regarded as one of the best bollywood actors spend hours learning acting skills, understanding new styles for every movie.
Success in creative field requires burnishing of talents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'movies'' or 'movie's'?
Suggestion: movies'; movie's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...try. Furthermore, Looking at careers of actors or other creative people who are ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...their field. For example, Aamir Khan and Irrfan Khan who are regarded as one of t...
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to act'.
Suggestion: to act
...t bollywood actors spend hours learning acting skills, understanding new styles for ev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, so, well, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 58.6224719101 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 290.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14827586207 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56822484115 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631034482759 0.4932671777 128% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.3478491371 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3125 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217827296508 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712205562971 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708556093729 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13561117152 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781375928323 0.0667264976115 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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