Some people believe that citizens can most benefit their communities by contributing time
and resources to volunteer efforts (e.g., town cleanups, youth sports leagues, food and
clothing drives). Others believe that a community is better served when most of its citizens
engage in the political process necessary to select the community leaders most likely to
establish fair policies and initiate effective programs.
Every citizen must work for the welfare of society. While contribyting time and resources to volunteer efforts will benefit society in short term, but for long term affect citizens should engage in the political process neccessary to select the community leaders.
Responsible citizens can help poor and needy ones by contributing food and resources and childrens by organising sports meets. But these efforts will help the needy ones for only short period of time. It will have temporary affect on their conditions. On other hand by electing appropriate community leaders with proper knowledge will help to eradicate trial and tribulations of the people of community in longer run.
Furthermore, responsible community leaders will check if the funds offered by government are used in the fair and proper way. Which will increase the number of youth sports leagues , financial and other useful aid.
Moreover, It will be very difficult to check if all the sections and sectors of society are provided equal volunteer help. There can be number of volunteer drives going on in a city at different time and different location. So, there can be a case that a lot of time or money is wasted to people of a specific part of community, or in a specific field.
On the contrary,it can be said that there are some leaders who looks to earn profit only. But no. of such leaders is les
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...will help the needy ones for only short period of time. It will have temporary affect on their...
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Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... period of time. It will have temporary affect on their conditions. On other hand by elec...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rease the number of youth sports leagues , financial and other useful aid. More...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... in a specific field. On the contrary,it can be said that there are some leaders...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, while, in short, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 33.0505617978 21% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 2235.4752809 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 233.0 442.535393258 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94849785408 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65248323729 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 215.323595506 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570815450644 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 704.065955056 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.1916538643 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6923076923 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205572633666 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608402170326 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483381256991 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101065588739 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452270527363 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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