To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Earlier human being used to live in wild, but as the time progressed, human beings being the most intelligent living species started living in colonies, cities or villages that is a society. People belonging to different society differ in cultural,social, emotional and mental behavior and style.
In order to study characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities. Major cities are those cities that are the backbone of a country or society. These cities are most important for social and economic development of country. As most of the large industries and companies has headquaters in these cities and they act as managing trade within the country. These cities are most responsible for influencing the style and beliefs of people. As these cities as seen as symbol of mordernisation and development, beliefs and styles prevailing or adopted by people of big cities are adopted by other people thruogh tv, radio etc.
Furthermore, Most of the role models who are responsible for changing or influencing society lives in these areas. For instance,in India most of the politician resides in new delhi whereas actors resides Mumbai. Similarly, most of the politicians in USA live in Washington and actors in Los Angeles.
ON contrary, it can be said that minor cities and rural areas have different cultural, social traditions. But, as lot of people from these areas move towards big cities in search of job and better life,there is significant no. of migrants in big cities.So, the different cultural and social traditions can also be studied.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, similarly, so, whereas, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 254.0 442.535393258 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14566929134 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89121431552 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547244094488 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 704.065955056 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9662373598 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.3571428571 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114602185423 0.243740707755 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542368028719 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749518538353 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0621113983752 0.150359130593 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050304453103 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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