Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
In today,s word problem environmental problems are increasing due to urbanisation and modernisation.First priority of the nations should be to conserve environment. Nation should pass lawstp preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural estate, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
Overpopulation and urbanisation has lead to clearing of large number of forest or agricultural field which give rise to certain environmental problems. Pollution is incresing day by day. Lot of people suffers from air diseases like asthma. Trees are essential as they inhale carbondioxide, exhale oxygen and purify air. Scientist believes earth is becoming warm due to less wild area.
To conserve the balance of ecosystem it is neccessary to preserve wild areas and wild species. Due to industrialisation and other factors, wild areas in nations are quite rare. For example, According to recent study from enivornmental department of India, it was found that wild area constitue for thirty percent of country's total area in 1950, whereas now country contains only ten percent wild area. That has changed the environmental conditions of these areas, which has increased naturual disastrs in these areas. Land have also become less fertile.
Moreover, econmic gain is temporary and short term, but conserving these rare wild areas will have permanent long term impact. There are lot of species that are on verge of extinction. Rhinos, white tiger are some of these species. If nations does not preserve this areas, that day is not far that only living species will be human beings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, whereas, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 2235.4752809 60% => OK
No of words: 252.0 442.535393258 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34523809524 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95130068562 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.4932671777 130% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 704.065955056 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.8880631143 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1875 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285641243172 0.243740707755 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800051452452 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137617581984 0.0758088955206 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178152776795 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140575894318 0.0667264976115 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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