People who are the most deeply committed to an idea or policy are also the most critical of it.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In deve

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People who are the most deeply committed to an idea or policy are also the most critical of it.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Any good idea or policy whemnimplemented properly can change the life of people. People who are most deeply connected with an idea are most critical of it.
A good idea when executed properly has power to change the mankind. Any person who has an idea or connected to an idea are most critical of it beceause that idea or policy can create a defference to the world. These people wants to know if the policy or idea suggested by them is implemented properly.
Furthermore, a person spends months and years to come up with an idea. If his ideas or policies is not implemented properly, this will be a lose to his time and hardwork. Sometimes government or other authorities assign officials, give resources to them to study a particular case and come up with policies that can assauge situations.In that case,if idea is not executed properly there will be loss of resources. Any idea that has potential to change people life must not lend in bad hands. Ideas like making new weapons or nuclear bombs
Moreover, idea without proper implementation is like a soul without body. Execution is one of the most important part for an idea to create a difference. For example, Steve Jobs founder of Apple, was released from his first company as he wanted ideas to be implemented in his way. Jobs continued working on his ideas and started new company Apple that is based on his ideas. Today apple is one of world leading mobile and laptop manfactuting country, while the other company that released jobs is not much successful.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, as to, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 265.0 442.535393258 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74716981132 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69714984781 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520754716981 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 704.065955056 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.8400786469 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8571428571 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191018698072 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859984636196 0.0831039109588 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096134345509 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159279333838 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845897058758 0.0667264976115 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.


Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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