Some people believe it is often necessary, even desirable, for political leaders to withhold information from the public. Others believe that the public has a right to be fully informed.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Poltical Leaders are elected by the society so that they act as the represantative of public in constitution and work for their welfare. Citezens has right to be fully informed.
All the information regarding every policy endorsed by poltical leaders should be known public. If public have full knowledge about the policies, why it is being introduced, how can it supress that problem, how much time and money will be require to implement policy, how many people will benefit. If public have all this information they will better understand and rely on the policies and decisions made by leaders. If people have al knowledge about the policies their will be less chances of haox.
Furthermore , People should know when country or a region is undergoing crises. People should know if their is possibility of a economic crises, war with other country, natural disaster, etc. Information regarding these issues will help citizens to better prepare themselves for the consequences of issues like these instead of fully depending on government.
Moreover, Information regarding sensitive issues can sometime cause instant chaos in the country. But if information is not provided it can lead to even bad results and a bigger magnitude of turbulance. For example, poltical leaders knew that prices of sugarcane will go dowm as their was abundance of sugar in country and their is less export demand.Leaders decided to withhold the information as it can create instant chaos. But results were even worse. Most of the sugarcane farmers went bankrupt at the end of season in march-april ,when they are required to pay children's school fees, house rent and other important expenditure. Which led to severe depression and some farmers even commited suicide. If leaders had shared the information earlier, farmers would have managed to save or arrange money before the deadline.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 247, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'implementing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: implementing
...how much time and money will be require to implement policy, how many people will benefit. I...
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Line 2, column 418, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...policies and decisions made by leaders. If people have al knowledge about the poli...
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Line 2, column 479, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun chances is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...wledge about the policies their will be less chances of haox. Furthermore , People ...
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Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ll be less chances of haox. Furthermore , People should know when country or a re...
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Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...ndergoing crises. People should know if their is possibility of a economic crises, wa...
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Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... should know if their is possibility of a economic crises, war with other country...
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Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'cris', 'crise', 'crisis'?
Suggestion: cris; crise; crisis
...w if their is possibility of a economic crises, war with other country, natural disast...
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Line 4, column 324, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...r was abundance of sugar in country and their is less export demand.Leaders decided t...
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Line 4, column 352, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Leaders
...country and their is less export demand.Leaders decided to withhold the information as ...
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Line 4, column 468, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...But results were even worse. Most of the sugarcane farmers went bankrupt at the e...
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Line 4, column 515, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cane farmers went bankrupt at the end of season in march-april ,when they are req...
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Line 4, column 538, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...upt at the end of season in march-april ,when they are required to pay childrens ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 301.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20598006645 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78381522543 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.8499866958 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9375 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209326218506 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071511495152 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457803660598 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126225426124 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383784332276 0.0667264976115 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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