To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Earlier human being used to live in wild,but as the time progressed,human beings being the most intelligent living species
started living in colonies,cities or villages that is a society.People belonging to different society differ in cultural,social
,emotional and mental behavior and style.
In order to study characteristics of a society,one must study its major cities.Major cities are those cities that are the backbone of
a country or society.These cities are most important for social and economic development of country.As most of the large industries and companies has headquaters in these cities and they act as managing trade within the country
These cities are most responsible for influencing the style and beliefs of people. As these cities as seen as symblol of mordernisation and development,beliefs and styles prevailing or adopted by people
of big cities are adopted by other people through tv,radio etc.
Furthermore,Most of the role models who are responsible for changing or influencing society lives in these areas.For instance,in India most of the politician resides in new delhi whereas actors resides Mumbai.
Similarly,most of the politicians in USA live in Washington and actors in Los Angeles.
ON contrary,it can be said that minor cities and rural areas have different cultural,social traditions.But,as lot of people from these areas move towards
big cities in search of job and better life,there is significant no. of migrants in big cities.So,the different cultural
and social traditions can also be studied.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, similarly, so, whereas, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 2235.4752809 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 236.0 442.535393258 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60593220339 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.52771224205 2.79657885939 126% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 215.323595506 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567796610169 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 704.065955056 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.322494082 60.3974514979 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 189.0 118.986275619 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.7142857143 23.4991977007 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 5.21951772744 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.97078651685 241% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118089837635 0.243740707755 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491811002527 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567671021714 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0425331777192 0.150359130593 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544516012218 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 14.1392134831 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.06 48.8420337079 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 12.1743820225 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.85 12.1639044944 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.38706741573 123% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 11.8971910112 261% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.