Some people believe that citizens can most benefit their communities by contributing time
and resources to volunteer efforts (e.g., town cleanups, youth sports leagues, food and
clothing drives). Others believe that a community is better served when most of its citizens
engage in the political process necessary to select the community leaders most likely to
establish fair policies and initiate effective programs.
Every citizen must work for the welfare of society. While contributing time and resources to volunteer efforts will benefit society in short term, but for long term affect citizens should engage in the political process neccessary to select the community leaders.
Responsible citizens can help poor and needy ones by contributing food and resources and childern's by organizing sports meets. But these efforts will help the needy ones for only short period of time. It will have temporary affect on their conditions. On other hand by electing appropriate community leaders with proper knowledge will help to eradicate trial and tribulations of the people of community in longer run.
Furthermore, responsible community leaders will check if the funds offered by government are used in the fair and proper way. Which will increase the number of youth sports leagues , financial and other useful aid.
Moreover, It will be very difficult to check if all the sections and sectors of society are provided equal volunteer help. There can be number of volunteer drives going on in a city at different time and different location. So, there can be a case that a lot of time or money is wasted to people of a specific part of community, or in a specific field. An official qualified community council will make sure that every problem poverty, illiteracy, etc all, are met with equal consideration.
On the contrary,it can be said that there are some leaders who does not work for the welfare of society and their only aim is to earn profit. But the number of such leaders is less.
Every citizen must volunteer whenever they have time. But first and foremost is selecting an appropriate candidate that will establish fair policies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...will help the needy ones for only short period of time. It will have temporary affect on their...
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Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... period of time. It will have temporary affect on their conditions. On other hand by elec...
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Line 4, column 180, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rease the number of youth sports leagues , financial and other useful aid. Moreo...
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Line 6, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...th equal consideration. On the contrary,it can be said that there are some leaders...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, in short, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 287.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03135888502 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68210231712 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533101045296 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5645147017 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.25 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19923059804 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621040082259 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478836627373 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981927571927 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468428826343 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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