“Motilac is a substance that occurs naturally in the human digestive tract. Many consumers of dietary supplements containing motilac report significant easing of digestive discomfort after just a few weeks of use. Among Greenhorne residents, the consumption of motilac supplements has increased 80% over the last seven years. Last year, Greenhorne’s five hospitals reported fewer cases of serious gastrointestinal disorders than any year on record. Meanwhile, sales of motilac supplements are declining in the neighboring town of Etolin. Notably, hospitals in Etolin report a steady increase in the last two years in patients experiencing a wide range of distressing gastrointestinal symptoms. The clear explanation of these trends is that motilac is effective in preventing many serious gastrointestinal disorders."
It seems that motilac is effective in preventing serious gastrointestinal disorders, but there is a lot of weakness in the argument.
It is sateted that consumption of motilac supplements has increased 80% over last seven years, but the reason for increase in consumption is not mentioned. In last seven years, population of Greenhorne residents could have increased by 80% or more that would have augmented the need for more Motilac.
Moreover, Price of Motilac could have decreased in Greenhorne that would have waxed its consumption . Per capita income of residents could have increased that could have augmented demand for Motilac.
Furthermore, last year 5 hospitals reported fewer cases of gastrointestinal disorders. Information is provided about only five hospitals and number of cases is never mentioned.
While there is complete information regarding no. of gastrointestinal disorders in hospitals in Etolin, For Greenhorne, information is provided for only five hospitals. There could be other hospitals where no. of cases of serious gastrointestnal disorders might have increased.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, moreover, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.6327345309 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 28.8173652695 28% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 55.5748502994 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 2260.96107784 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 164.0 441.139720559 37% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69512195122 5.12650576532 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 4.56307096286 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30985672124 2.78398813304 119% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 204.123752495 42% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524390243902 0.468620217663 112% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 705.55239521 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59920159681 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 19.7664670659 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 22.8473053892 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5769448978 57.8364921388 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9090909091 119.503703932 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9090909091 23.324526521 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 5.70786347227 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0840520655311 0.218282227539 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033275575846 0.0743258471296 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326178551851 0.0701772020484 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0488220753512 0.128457276422 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327391972697 0.0628817314937 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.3799401198 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 48.3550499002 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 12.5979740519 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 98.500998004 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.1389221557 68% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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