Some people believe that it is helpful to view a challenging situation as an opportunity for
personal growth. Others believe that reimagining challenging situations this way occupies
too much of the focus one needs to face challenges effectively.
Succesful people are those who work smartly and utilize every hour they work in most productive way. A person should view challenging situation as an oppurtunity for personal growth.
Viewing challenges as a neccessary hurdles in order to achieve success, and recognizing those hurdles is most important for personal growth. Some people believes that reimagining challenging situations occupies too much of focus. These people think that reimagining challenging situation will waste time that could be better used to face challenges. They keep on working hard towards their goals and challenges, never recognizing things that could be making them slow and less efficient. For example, there are lot of repetitive complex calculations required for a task, the person who will not think about the task, will do calculations repeatedly. On the other hand the person who will think about the task will create a single program that will do repetitive calculations, that will save time and effort that can be utilized in doing something more productive.
Additionally, most of achievers are good thinkers and doers. For ex, M.S.Dhoni who is regarded as on of the best captains india ever had, revealed in a interview that he thinks about gameplan a day before every match, what he and team will do, if one of his strategy fails. Mukesh Ambani, business tycoon of India realised that his company is undergoing financial crises, viewed the challenging situations as oppurtunity. He understood that Reliance Telecom revenue is going down, because of decline in number of consumers as Reliance Telecom was charing high price for mobile data. Mukesh realised the problem and opted for newest technology which was not used by any other mobile operator at that time, which made mobile data plan much cheaper leading to highest revenue year for the company in history.
On the contrary, overthinking about challenging situations will lead to waste of time and stress.We have seen so many people thinking more, working less. So yes, thinking about weaknesses and working on them is neccessary for personal growth, but not overthinking.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 340.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25294117647 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75579917007 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567647058824 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5204751192 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.066666667 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221290139975 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991142032379 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132170976115 0.0758088955206 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143046048463 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539000015509 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.