Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose fields of study in which jobs are plentiful.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Every person aims to achieve success and live healthy life. Educational institute should encourage students to choose fields of study in which jobs are plentiful.
Everyone desires to be financially stable and support his friends and families whenever required. Field of study where jobs are plentiful will help students in achieving financial stability. In a recent survey it was found that many students wants to get a stable and high paying jobs, but they very little about jobs and salaries in different fields.
Furthermore, as reported by established news company some fields have less jobs, more candidates while in others fields there is shortage of applicants. Which leads to unemployement for those who are studying in fields where job requirements are low. As, there are less skilled candidates in some of the fields like computer science in ireland, many of these jobs are taken by people with study in different field that hampers the quality of work.
Moreover, because of small number of skilled proffesionals in various fields, they have very high salary with respect to other people. Large difference in salary widens the economic gap which can increase poverty.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun jobs is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...tablished news company some fields have less jobs, more candidates while in others f...
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Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...s, there are less skilled candidates in some of the fields like computer science in ireland...
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Line 4, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e quality of work. Moreover, because of small number of skilled proffesionals in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 190.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23684210526 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61150766784 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652631578947 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2164145592 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210706121629 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994594038349 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13941706658 0.0667982634062 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139874226413 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105496111598 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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