Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Dancing plays an important role in a culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Dancing plays an important part in a culture.
Dancing plays an important part in a culture.
Every culture has a diferent dance form. American people have certain types of dance like ballet etc. While Asian and African people have different type of dance form. For example, within India there are many dance form pertaining to diferent cultures. Punjabis have bhangra, while there is bhartnatayam and kuchipudi in south India. Different dance forms helps us understand better about different cultures. For example, Bhangra requires more energy and is more lively- people of punjab are genrally considered as more lively. Bhartnatyam and Kuchipuri requires finesse and people of South India is known for attention to detail and finesse.
Dance helps people connect within a culture. People organise certain events for cultural dance show where people meet and knows more about their culutre. In India there is special occasion of ladies sangeet in which womens dances whenever their is marriage in a family,it helps them connect with their cultura and traditions. Christian bride and groom usually dance in their marriage. Dance has taken a major role in a culture. Be it birth of a child, marriage or any special occasion people want to dance whenever they are happy. And different people have different dance forms that help them connect to their culture.
People express themselves by dancing. People uses dance some time to expess anger, sadness or hapiness. We have seen people dancing in television shows and events where they potray and express their enmtions against the injustice in society and culuture. For example, a dance group in a reality tv competition in India potrayed the evil presented in society like child marriage and dowry, and expressed their anger towards it. It helped to create awareness among the people of society. They were later praised for their efforts. So, dance can also bring change in the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19108280255 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38270200712 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515923566879 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0156219494 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.9166666667 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0833333333 20.6045352989 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 5.45110844103 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14058811304 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642047231863 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875012390256 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171487820768 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124788702756 0.0645574589148 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.93 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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