Some people believe that success in creative fields, such as painting, fiction writing, and filmmaking, primarily requires hard work and perseverance. Others believe that such success mainly requires innate talents that cannot be learned.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Every person is unique in its own and acquire different talents, skills and abilities. Fields like painting, fiction writing and filmmaking requires a person to have inborn creativity and talent. The prompt here recommends that some people believe that success in creative fields is based upon hard work and dedication on the other hand some people believe that success in these fields requires talent and creativity which cannot be acquired. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the suggestion and argue that people who has talent in creative fields are only able to succeed. The below two paragraphs will cast light on my personal perspective with an apt example.
To begin with, nobody can be trained to be creative it comes from within us. For instance, In a school the principle says to involve students in all the fields such as music, sports, art and many more so that students can become all rounder. But there are many people who are not able to cope up with different fields where they don’t have any interest and natural skills and are not able learn and practice. The above example illustrates that if creativity and talent cannot developed it is inborn and it comes naturally.
Moreover, in creative fields a person is only able have a successful career if they continue produce exceptional work. For instance, there are many artists in the Bollywood music industry but people admire only few artist like A.R. Rahman because he has been giving unique and high quality music. The above example illustrates that in such fields people require talent and creativity to produce exceptional work and only best people are able to survive.
Of course, some people believe that with hard work and preserverance person can learn, practice skills and achieve a successful career. In my opinion, talents and creativity cannot be acquired because it is an inborn quality and not everyone can pursue career in the such fields even with vigorous training and practice.
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- Some people believe that success in creative fields such as painting fiction writing and filmmaking primarily requires hard work and perseverance Others believe that such success mainly requires innate talents that cannot be learned Write a response in wh 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ope up with different fields where they dont have any interest and natural skills an...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... it is inborn and it comes naturally Moreover in creative fields a person is only abl...
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Line 5, column 447, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and only best people are able to survive Of course some people believe that with ...
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Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to practice'
Suggestion: to practice
...work and preserverance person can learn practice skills and achieve a successful career ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, for instance, of course, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 329.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9179331307 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39577699619 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45896656535 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.2370786517 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 329.0 23.0359550562 1428% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 60.3974514979 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1618.0 118.986275619 1360% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 329.0 23.4991977007 1400% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 104.0 5.21951772744 1993% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370571046608 0.243740707755 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.370571046608 0.0831039109588 446% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229449335097 0.150359130593 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101305257599 0.0667264976115 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 166.2 14.1392134831 1175% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -262.46 48.8420337079 -537% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.92365168539 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 131.6 12.1743820225 1081% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.74 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.64 8.38706741573 270% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 11.8971910112 462% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 133.6 11.2143820225 1191% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.