Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education. Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented above.
Morality means teaching what is right and what is wrong or choosing wisely between good or bad. On the other hand teaching logical reasoning means to teach about the ability of applying one's brain and then act that way. In my opinion Teaching morality should be the foundation of education and not logical reasoning. I support my position with the help of following points.
To begin with, Morality should be taught to the person at first - during the early childhood stage. If a child is not taught the moral principles at a very young age, then he/she would not be in a state to listen as at teenage the child begans to take decision of his own. By not teaching moral principle at right time he may take bad decision in future as he is not able to diffrentiate between what is good and what is bad. On the contrary Logical reasoning skills could be developed in later stages. The Moral principles of the person should be strong enough in order to succeed in life. For example- Supose a child is not taught that drugs and alcohol are bad for health and all his/her friends at teenagee do drugs then he will also eventually start doing drugs,If he would have taught that durgs are bad then he could have stopped his frieds also from taking/doing drug. This proofs that teaching moral principles help child to grow better and take proper decisions.
In addition to, foundation of education should be teaching morality. The behaviour of the student with the students of his class tells much about his moral values. These moral principles that are taught helps much in life to take right decisions. For example - A owner of a company hired an outside consultant to suggest how they can increase the effiecency of the company. The consultant will give ideas but accepting the ideas is based on the principles that is, if a particular idea is taken it should not affect other part of the company. If morality is taught at the right time then it helps the student in future.
In contrast, Logical reasoning also plays a vital role in one's life. With the morality one should also be good in thinking logically well. For example - after a good or bad decision is taken one must be logically strong to thing the outcome of the step taken. But this logical reasoning foundation can be done done latter. First the moral foundation should be strong.
In conclusion, Foundation of education should be the moral principles following the logical reasoning. As, without moral value a person is unable to take a right or good decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, then, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2087.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 443.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71106094808 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45720372534 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433408577878 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.9 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.9374435057 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9583333333 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4583333333 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70833333333 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261307566708 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102948563619 0.0831039109588 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849503636252 0.0758088955206 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181920805272 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461746976112 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 48.8420337079 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 12.1743820225 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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