Some people believe that traveling to and living in numerous places increases one's ability to relate and connect to other people. Others believe that this ability is better cultivated by living in one place and developing a deep understanding of that community.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
quality is more important than quantity. This also applies to living in your community. A community contains its unique culture, history, and background; these are very important framework to understand and appreciate how people act, speak, and interact with others. On top of that, good friends and a sense of welcome are essential to develop a sense of belonging in a community. Therefore, the ability of relate and connecting to other people is best developed living in one place.
Culture, history, and background are essential to build a framework of understanding how others act. In the US, it is rude to invade other's personal bubble, but this is not an universal rule in other country. There are thousands of subtle social rules that each region contains. It requires years of living to acuire these social senses. On top of that, there's date of the year that are important to people and community such as the founding date of a community, a birthdate of a important person, or a historical event that is moment to a community. If you don't have the right framework, your action may come across as gall, when you truly meant to be affable to them. It is important to interact with people with the right framework, and this takes time to develop.
If you constantly move, how you develop a long lasting relationship with another person. It is hard to keep a relationship or friendship going when the two of you aren't in the same city. Spending time together is best way to strengthen your relationship. These long lasting relationships are very important framework of how to interact with people. It is diffcult to have indepth and serious conversation with a stranger. There needs to be mutual trust between the two of you to have such a conversation. Long-lasting relationship and indepth interaction are best cultivated when you don't constantly move around
There is merit of traveling to many places where you can meet various people to learn about their cultures, background, and how they think. The more people you interact with, the easier it is for you to connect with them. However, you could also reap these advantages by meeting more poeple in your community. If you attend a amatur club, you could meet other people just as you travelled to another place.
The ability to relate and connect with others could be best developped living in one place instead of constanly travelling to other places. You can develop a extensive framework to understand people and how to best interact them when you spend years to be acquinted with all the culture, history, and background within that community.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Quality
quality is more important than quantity. This a...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...others personal bubble, but this is not an universal rule in other country. There ...
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Suggestion: there's
...re these social senses. On top of that, theres date of the year that are important to ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ing date of a community, a birthdate of a important person, or a historical event...
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Suggestion: don't
...t that is moment to a community. If you dont have the right framework, your action m...
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Suggestion: aren't
...or friendship going when the two of you arent in the same city. Spending time togethe...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...n the same city. Spending time together is best way to strengthen your relationship. Th...
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Suggestion: don't
...nteraction are best cultivated when you dont constantly move around There is merit ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...poeple in your community. If you attend a amatur club, you could meet other peopl...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...elling to other places. You can develop a extensive framework to understand peopl...
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Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., and background within that community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, such as, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2173.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 443.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90519187359 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76134890424 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451467268623 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 686.7 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.8017490677 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5416666667 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4583333333 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.04166666667 5.21951772744 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229695907412 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811357768453 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132395585261 0.0758088955206 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17042768659 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107668752131 0.0667264976115 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.