For the normal people of world who living as expect that one of the sport stars or any movie star for his or her role model. So, This is a resposibility of particular sport star or moviee star to obligate to behave as role model for the all the people, who believe in his or her philosophy. Here I am supporting that issue by giving some instance.
Firstly, We all know that every sports stars and movie stars are already paid for the million of the dollars for any game or any movie. Their income are already fulfill its for his or her pleasure, Though he has lot of money for spend anywhere else. So, My point of view they have to donate that money for societal responsibility. For instance, Salman khan is running his own charity trust named "Being Human". which is donate lot of demand to fulfill it and take societal responsibility.
Furthermore, I would say that most of the sports persons philanthropist. For Instance, Virat Kohli is running a charitable trust. Which trust help for poor children or senior citizen. Very famous argentina's football star cristiano ronaldo is also donate a lot of money to any poverty person.
So,I must say about that topic, sport magnet having obligate to behave as role model of all people and specially for the youngstars, who are the future of new world.
In Last, I concluded that It is a responsibility of any magnet whether he is a sport person or he is a film star to help to any demand or expectation of society. Any sports stars or movie stars have behaviour like a normal person. So, Any young generation people who look up to them as a role model of his/her life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...eady paid for the million of the dollars for any game or any movie. Their income ...
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...movie. Their income are already fulfill its for his or her pleasure, Though he has ...
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...ty trust named 'Being Human'. which is donate lot of demand to fulfill it a...
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Suggestion: donated
...named 'Being Human'. which is donate lot of demand to fulfill it and take so...
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Suggestion: donated
...football star cristiano ronaldo is also donate a lot of money to any poverty person. ...
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...ot of money to any poverty person. So,I must say about that topic, sport magnet...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.294832826748 0.240241500013 123% => OK
Verbs: 0.12462006079 0.157235817809 79% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0547112462006 0.0880659088768 62% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0395136778116 0.0497285424764 79% => OK
Pronouns: 0.063829787234 0.0444667217837 144% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.127659574468 0.12292977631 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0273556231003 0.0406280797675 67% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64442357411 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0273556231003 0.030933414821 88% => OK
Particles: 0.00303951367781 0.0016655270985 182% => OK
Determiners: 0.0942249240122 0.0997080785238 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00607902735562 0.0249443105267 24% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0151975683891 0.0148568991511 102% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1634.0 2732.02544248 60% => OK
No of words: 293.0 452.878318584 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57679180887 6.0361032391 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.58838876751 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.293515358362 0.366273622748 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.17747440273 0.280924506359 63% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.116040955631 0.200843997647 58% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0819112627986 0.132149295362 62% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64442357411 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 219.290929204 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501706484642 0.48968727796 102% => OK
Word variations: 49.5634186808 55.4138127331 89% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6194690265 78% => OK
Sentence length: 18.3125 23.380412469 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2865430014 59.4972553346 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.125 141.124799967 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 23.380412469 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.674092028746 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 36.059940273 51.4728631049 70% => OK
Elegance: 1.97333333333 1.64882698954 120% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438631611067 0.391690518653 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0902358213441 0.123202303941 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.120820837271 0.077325440228 156% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.530091857637 0.547984918172 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.200898940492 0.149214159877 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158757056547 0.161403998019 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917287610506 0.0892212321368 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.255689094137 0.385218514788 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0845672145405 0.0692045440612 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265712312478 0.275328986314 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768175103071 0.0653680567796 118% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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