This statement points out that the greatness of a nation is represented buy tthe fortune prossessed by the people. This statement seems plausible at first glance, but actually neglect the contribution from other aspect of the society. The great nation that hestorists defined are never only rich in the prossessment of its people, but flourshed in extensive ways, including the science, art and also other subject like architecture. The british empire had so much impact to the world not only because it reached the economy properity much earlier before other countries, but also depend on the advanced technology on shipmaking and the manufacture of firearms. The success of the WW2 indeed shows the giant economic power of the ally countries, the scientific invention such as atom bombs also accelerate this process.
Looking back at the history, not a sigle country could become "great" only from the high income of the citizens. The country weak at culture and science could never be seen as a superpower. Indeed some of the country in the middlesat reach a much higher income than people in other countries depending on their resource, but until now it's still ridiculous to call them great nations. The universities, research deparments, and the artists could not compare with what we could consider as a great nation, such as the U.S. and China. With fewer scientific achievements are notable worldwide, less art virtuosos renowen, it indicated that there's still long way to go unitil they became a great nation.
On the other hand, if we serious consider where the people's welfare comes from, it could be elusibale that why a nation's greatness does not only depend on the weath. Take present days as an example, a country that is not highly- industrilzed has little chance to become great. Given that only the advanced techonology and industry could help a country get more employment, taxes and etc. Only when a nation has a pillar industry that strong enough to sableize its economy, the higher employment rate and salaries could be achieve.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ct like architecture. The british empire had so much impact to the world not only...
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...making and the manufacture of firearms. The success of the WW2 indeed shows the gia...
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...d shows the giant economic power of the ally countries, the scientific invention suc...
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...ce could never be seen as a superpower. Indeed some of the country in the middlesat re...
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...d never be seen as a superpower. Indeed some of the country in the middlesat reach a much h...
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...rt virtuosos renowen, it indicated that theres still long way to go unitil they became...
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... from, it could be elusibale that why a nations greatness does not only depend on the w...
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...lp a country get more employment, taxes and etc. Only when a nation has a pillar industr...
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...leize its economy, the higher employment rate and salaries could be achieve.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, look, so, still, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 340.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06764705882 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72242227529 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582352941176 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8625828341 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.071428571 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143795171905 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507699737899 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427257227733 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097267018514 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202664059278 0.0667264976115 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.